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Sunlight In My Hair

I love the warm breeze with sunlight in my hair; each follicle gently lifted, kissed by Sol. Radiant arms touch my lively essence so rare; making my aged, tired, and lame body feel whole. Each follicle gently lifted, kissed by Sol; warmth of his smile brightens chilly wearied days. Making my aged, tired, and lame body feel whole; soaking up all of sunlight’s magical rays. Warmth of his smile brightens chilly wearied days; when all seems lost and full of deep depression. Soaking up all of sunlight’s magical rays; always seem to help with the soul’s transgression. When all seems lost and full of deep depression; radiant arms touch my lively essence so rare. Always seem to help with the soul’s transgression; I love the warm breeze with sunlight in my hair. Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey First Place Winner ~ "Sunlight” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nikko Palmario May 12, 2011

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Date: 12/28/2011 7:38:00 PM
Great poem. Congratulations on having two get through to the final round. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/28/2011 5:54:00 PM
Caryl. I have seen other pantoums making it big in the first round of Soup's contest. congrats with this lovely poem and TWO other poems of yours getting through Awesome!
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Date: 4/19/2011 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Sunlight" Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:30:00 AM
Excellent Pantoum!Congrats Caryl on your well deserved 1st place win---kashinath
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:05:00 PM
I could s feel the sunlight in your hair. Heartiest congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:05:00 PM
Wonderful sensations remembered while reading you excellent verse, congrad's on you're win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/17/2011 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I tried to think romance and sunlight and it just didn't happen for me, you on the other hand have captured it all...Kudos!
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:35:00 AM
Awesome Caryl, absolutely stunning!! Congratulations on your first place win in Nikko's contest ;) WN
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:26:00 PM
just stunning and deserving of top place, caryll! BIG CHEERS for the win.:) huggs!
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:52:00 PM
CAryl. I love this. you know what. In some ways it is talking about the same things I talked of when I did a pantoum a few months ago called Summer wind of Sea. Congrats on your fine win. You will love that book of your poems in it!!
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, caryl
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:59:00 PM
Many congrats on getting the number one spot : )
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:29:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your super first place win in Sunlight contest .. exquisite entry luv..enjoy..
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:44:00 AM
Im glad you chose this form..worked very well with the content. congrats on your big win. BG
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:39:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Caryl. The power of sunlight - the last stanza definds it best. Many congrats on your first place win, Lainie
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win!!!
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Date: 4/16/2011 10:33:00 AM
Super congratulations, Caryl on this wonderful pantuom ^_^!Wow! I really loved this clever write, I read this several times, and the more I read it, the more I love it-- you definitely made me appreciate this form--a fave for me and your lines worked so perfectly in my opinion, such a beautiful way to write about your appreciation for the sun :) will soupmail you about your prize... way to go for this awesome winner ^_^!!
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Date: 4/16/2011 10:08:00 AM
I love your lovely Pntoum. Congratulatilns on your no. 1 Love, Joyce
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