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Sunlight and True Light - Lunes

Sunlight (5-3-5 syllables) Sunlight filters in Shadows dance Morning coffee smiles ~~~~~~ True Light (3-5-3 words) Looking unto Jesus The Light of the World Forgiveness, peace, joy 10.23.2021
For William Kekaula's "Lune (mixed pair)" contest

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Date: 10/24/2021 3:20:00 AM
Very adept at this comparison and contrast, Jo.
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:31:00 AM
It's beautiful work. Taking deep into spiritual reflection and faith. Great imagery.
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Date: 10/23/2021 6:31:00 AM
I like the way you described sunlight and true light. Imagery in the first stanza, inspiration in the second.
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Date: 10/22/2021 10:37:00 PM
Splendid. A heavenly contrast.
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