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Sunlight

Ziiiiiiippppp ZING! The sunlight sings As it licks~ The eyeball of morning Shizzle .:.:..' Baby shizzle .:.:..'.:. On your asphalt griddle Shine up the backside of that thong!()() HOT diggity dog Said the toad on the log RipppppIT! It’s a grand day….* Flalalalaaaaaaaaaa Says the rooster’s TRa LA As your ears buds vibrate All brown and yummy Ring in your tummy Reflectin’ The sunshine’s highway ~tongue to the limb ~~she’s sun shimmying On this Zippty DO da DAY!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/25/2011 7:10:00 PM
UM WHAT THE H+ELL WAS THAT??????????? WAS IT ABOUT SEX OR U TRYING TO BE GHETTO AND HAPPY AT THE SAME TIME SORRY IF IM BEIN NEGATIVE AND PUTTIN YOU DOWN BUT THAT MADE ME SLIGHTLY TERRIFIED!
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Date: 4/20/2011 12:33:00 PM
lol great write
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Date: 4/19/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Sunlight" Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:19:00 PM
Such lovely sounds and effects here debbie. Heartiest congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:47:00 PM
the sounds of sunlight takes me away, debs.. super CHEERS for the stunning win! :) huggs
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Debbie
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:41:00 PM
wow, Debs, If I didn't know this was you,I would think Nikko wrote it. It has her flair so I am surprised you didnt' get even higher! congratulations, sweet lady
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Date: 4/16/2011 1:57:00 PM
Many congrats, Debbie : )
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your lucky number seven win in the Sunlight contest luv.. an exquisite entry .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:53:00 AM
Super congrats on this poem with a zing! this was just so alive, very unique Debbie-- really enjoyed this :D!
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:54:00 PM
A FEEL GOOD POEM, WELL DONE. JEFF
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:13:00 PM
A joyful poem, Deb! You sure do switch styles often. I would have sworn this was written by Izzy Gumbo. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:34:00 PM
Oh..boy...this one made me feel sooooo goooood !!!! Happy Dance !!
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