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Sunlight

Daybreak Greets the mornings. Enabling tomorrows Stimulating life and beauty. Our star. Vital. Life giving. Bountiful radiance. Emitting needed elements. Shining Warming. Energy waves. Illuminating dawn. Sending sunbeams upon the earth. Sunlight. © April 12, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Marcus Antwan

Date: 4/19/2011 7:28:00 PM

this was an interesting spin on the cinquain. lively imagery in such short and precise lines. thank you for the sweet comment on my work, and the encouragement.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/19/2011 7:01:00 PM

ahh was not familiar with the contest but have been out of it for a while. Excellent poem and congratulations on the win for sure!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Sunlight" Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/17/2011 10:20:00 PM

Dane Ann this isindeed a fine piece. Heartiest congrats for this win.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/17/2011 9:27:00 AM

Hey there DA, congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest ;) love Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/16/2011 5:57:00 PM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Dane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2011 3:43:00 PM

I like the way you divided this into the three cinquains. A cute approach. Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2011 12:50:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your super win in the Sunlight contest.. an exquisite entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/16/2011 12:02:00 PM

Super congrats Dane Ann on your win with this wonderful piece-- sure enjoyed how you describe the qualities of the sun here :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2011 8:43:00 AM

Lovely flow to your words Dane Ann on the beauty of sunlight... good luck in the contest my friend.. I see officially have your PM gold star now so enjoy the site once again and continue to thrill us all with your dynamic poetry luv..

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/12/2011 8:29:00 AM

A lovely write you have penned and a wonderful entry for the contest. Best of luck. Caryl