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Poetry Format: Rhyme 

Total 12 lines, each stanza increments by 3 syllables 8,11,14

 

Bright and glowing, attired in gold Birds sing to me, while bees kiss me, The butterflies love mien, golden Chipmunks relish my seeds with glee; I serenade you in your rainbow garden Patiently nurturing overbearing bees Sucking on my nectar even as the bold Butterflies compete with a certain cool ease; Bringing glorious sunshine into your tedious life And soaking in all the irresistible Sun power Making you smile like a proud florist you've never been In your garden of love, I’m your alluring Sunflower

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Date: 3/18/2024 3:39:00 AM
Hi MB , a beautiful poem written with lots of heart , a thoroughly deserving win , congratulations . Daniel
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Date: 3/18/2024 3:49:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, for your kind words. God bless!
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Date: 3/18/2024 3:49:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, for your kind words. God bless!
Date: 3/17/2024 2:10:00 PM
MB, congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful poem!
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Date: 3/17/2024 9:17:00 PM
Thank you, Tania. I'm glad you liked my poem and thought it was deserving of a first place. Many blessings!
Date: 3/9/2024 12:43:00 PM
I love that flower and your original take on it.
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Date: 3/9/2024 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, AD. Am glad you like it. Blessings!
Date: 3/5/2024 6:55:00 PM
Nice personification Faroooook. Could also be an acting exercise
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Date: 3/5/2024 7:21:00 PM
Lol. Thank you, Tom. I guess it is ;)
Date: 3/5/2024 11:42:00 AM
This is as delightful, and sunny, as a field of sunflowers, MB! Your words seek, and follow, the sun just like a sunflower. So many beautiful images and phrases! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings to you!
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Date: 3/5/2024 4:08:00 PM
Thank you,Sam. Your words inspire me to do better, always. I am much obliged. Many blessings to you!

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