Sunflower

sun rise, losing myself, has unleashed you in my world nestled in my arms feeling your fierce love leaving me in bliss fill with breathless time oh, you’re my beginning weaving through the end enchantment rhythm of romance the fragrant flower upon my earth 5/22/2021 Sunflower Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/2/2021 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful Acrostic story. I Love It. Have a blessed day.................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/1/2021 11:53:00 AM

So tender and full of romance Eve. Beautiful phrases - "enchantment rhythm," "leaving me in bliss with breathless time" among many other striking lines. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/1/2021 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. It's a beautiful poem ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/31/2021 11:36:00 PM

Wonderful Poem. Congratulations!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2021 11:26:00 PM

I love acrostics even if they seem beyond me. A wonderful poem, very flowing.