Sunday In the Park

While slowly walking through this lovely park
     on Sunday at noon,
          a warm day in June;
I hear the trillings of a meadowlark;
     his song crisp and clean;
          in oak trees so green.
And o’er the lake the summer breeze is blowing
as lovers in their dinghies slowly rowing.

              	I’m wishing you were here…

On monkey bars the joyful children play;
     climb up to the top;
          jump down with a plop.
Across the lawn a Frisbee sails away;
     a dog is in chase,
          and catches with grace.
While in the oak trees frisky squirrels playing;
along the path stroll lovers gently swaying.

               I’m wishing you were here…

You see the happy fam’lies sharing time;
     a picnic by lake
          with hot dogs and cake.
The clowns and vendors, and even a mime
     are all having fun
          in warm summer sun.
A park so full of life and people caring;
a lovely afternoon and time for sharing,
and everywhere you see the lovers pairing.

               I’m wishing you were here…
                    but feel your presence near.


May 19, 2018
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Gentry Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Oh I like this. Congratulations on your win.
Gondolf Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Thank you, Susan, I glad you enjoyed this one. John
George   Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 2:20 AM
I really enjoyed this, John. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Elaine
Gondolf Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 4:05 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine, I appreciate it. John
Cunningham Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 9:35 PM
A lovely romantic verse John, congratulations. Tom
Gondolf Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Thanks, Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:23 PM
A lovely day! So many romantic and playful images! Well done, John!
Gondolf Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. I had a mental picture as I was writing this; I wish I was there right now. :) John
Warrior Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Nicely done my friend...I shied away from this one...love and light...^WW^
Gondolf Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Thanks, WW, I appreciate your comments. John
Gentry Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 3:49 AM
Good luck in the contest. Well done.
Gondolf Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 4:08 AM
Thank you, Susan, I appreciate it.
Sergi Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Hi John : What a heart felt poem. You have epitomized a simple walk in the park with memories of your love! I'm in awe and it's nice to know you!
Gondolf Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Ralph, thanks for the great comment and visit, I appreciate it. John
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 9:42 AM
John, you created a wonderful poem with Gregory's form. Love it!
Gondolf Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Thank you so much for your comments, Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. John
Sands Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 9:01 AM
Well expressed John. I can see it and feel it as I read this :) Good luck in the contest!
Gondolf Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi, I'm glad I could transport your mind to this park. John
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 8:47 AM
aww so full of longing for someone no longer around - such touching lines. I wrote my first stanza about 10 days ago and there it remains in my notebook... I must try and finish it!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Gondolf Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thanks so much for your comments, Jan, may your muse be kind to you today. John
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