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Sunday Funday

I cried and I cried and I cried My little pet chicken had died Mom offers a treat Delicious to eat Here's some nuggets boneless and fried

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 5/16/2017 9:37:00 AM

Did chickie happen to mention, "The sky is falling," before passing on?

Chris Green

Date: 5/8/2017 7:22:00 AM

That was funny Tim. She was a good chicken...good enough to eat. :)

Maria Williams

Date: 5/8/2017 5:59:00 AM

Very cute limerick Tim. Main thing though , is, did it stop the tears?.... Maria

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/7/2017 11:02:00 PM

You sure wasn't a hen? LOL

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/7/2017 11:01:00 PM

So funny, now stop crying, we drowning here!!!!

Darren White
Date: 5/8/2017 7:59:00 AM

stop commenting and continue pumping, you lazy ...... ;)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/7/2017 5:56:00 PM

ha! very cute, tim! nicely done...

Eve Roper

Date: 5/7/2017 4:25:00 PM

Hahaha.... sorry I should be crying with you, but the poem is to funny :) I like it. My favorite food chicken baked, fried, BBQ mmmmm ~*

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:42:00 PM

mine too...now I'm hungry.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/7/2017 4:24:00 PM

Haha..Poor chicken that became the next chicken nuggets meat. :)Clack clack.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:41:00 PM

clack clack...lol

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/7/2017 4:24:00 PM

Meal

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2017 4:13:00 PM

OH MY, such barbarism!! Tim, this is a cute limerick AND the meter is really great too! Sunday Funday for all but the chicken.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:41:00 PM

lol

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/7/2017 2:34:00 PM

Top of The Afternoon to you Tim. Oh boy. Ok this was the smile for the afternoon. Thank you for that. This is light and so in the spirit of a Limerick. I've been seeing so many Limericks theses days I have to try another attempt at it for you all seem to be having a good time. Enjoy the night. Well done and I'm still smiling at the thought and at the originality of it all.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:40:00 PM

Thanks Lisa...Darren wanted smiles today

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/7/2017 1:29:00 PM

Haha, good one Tim :) I refused to eat the chickens my Father would "make ready" for our dinners. I went without. After all, I had NAMED those chickens... they had become my pets. I COULDN'T eat them !!

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:39:00 PM

It is hard to separate once attached.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/7/2017 1:03:00 PM

Nice one :) 7! xomo

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:39:00 PM

Thanks Mo :)

Darren White

Date: 5/7/2017 11:53:00 AM

Awww, Sunday Funday you said, eh? hahaha :)

Darren White
Date: 5/8/2017 1:01:00 AM

Hahaha, that rabbit's name was Flappie by the way, no idea what the dad's name was though ;)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:37:00 PM

lol...at least it wasn't the rabbit

Sara Ella

Date: 5/7/2017 11:40:00 AM

Crispy fried chicken is good as long as it doesn't have a name. Fun poem Tim :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:36:00 PM

Kentucky Fried is a good name.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/7/2017 11:23:00 AM

Well, I'm not eating chicken, and I didn't get the memo about positive posts today. Love your limerick, Tim. My condolences on the loss of your pet, and boo hiss to your Mom.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 4:35:00 PM

lol

Jan Allison

Date: 5/7/2017 10:51:00 AM

ha ha ha ha ha it's a cruel world Tim - yes go ahead and eat the old hen lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/7/2017 11:50:00 AM

I once owned a grey bantam named Esmeralda as she was rather mis shapen lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 5/7/2017 10:53:00 AM

It's all Darren's fault he said only positive posts today : )