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Sunday Best

SUNDAY BEST or A Soldier’s Coup of Grace

Was always smartest one in his brigade
A pride in his appearance was consistent
Though beach at Dunkirk was no church parade 
Standards upheld with doggedness persistent
In desert waste - Tobruk and  Alamein
Those baggy shorts and boots held little chic
Where swelter sweat and dust became his bane
Endured fear, blood and missiles’ deafening shriek
Then tide of war reversed, Allies stirred might
Breached Norman coast, and footslogged across France
Reached German border, victory in sight
When single bullet halted his advance
And then at last he'd time to spruce and rest
At peace, and laid out in his Sunday best

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/19/2019 7:42:00 PM
Your poem gave me goosebumps, Geoffrey. Very descriptive with an unexpected sad ending. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 1/19/2019 10:57:00 AM
Geoffrey, enjoyed reading this well descriptive and well written poem that arouses strong emotions. Congratulations on your win!:). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/19/2019 9:46:00 AM
A war to end all wars we've been told, Geoffrey. Excellent writing. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/26/2017 10:02:00 PM
Wow! Terrific and poignant!!
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Date: 8/21/2017 5:49:00 PM
I'd call this Sonnet a "best" on any day of the week. Your vocabulary adds to the intellect of this piece.
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Date: 8/21/2017 5:32:00 PM
A powerful poem Geoffrey. Well done :)
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