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Sun Versus Moon

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Sun fades from autumn skies with rainbow light Then the gloaming will darken skies with night. Roosting birds return to boughs, a grand sight, As twilight shadows captures them in flight When the pale moon tests our will and our might While rising slowly to her lofty height, Causing lovers to kiss, or foes to fight. Enchanted moon will soon fade in soft light As the sunrise again conquers the night. 8-24-16 Monorhyme mania - Poetry Contest Sponsor John Hamilton

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John Michaels

Date: 4/16/2017 7:17:00 AM

Lovely descriptive piece with evocative imagery. Well written! Regards, John.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/9/2016 10:53:00 PM

Lovely descriptive piece Connie. love phyl

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/6/2016 4:10:00 AM

Congratulations on fine placement, Connie:) very peaceful scenes painted with your words:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/30/2016 8:20:00 PM

Such a lovely, enchanting monorhyme poem, Connie! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/30/2016 7:25:00 PM

Lovely, Connie!

Joseph May

Date: 8/30/2016 5:37:00 PM

Beautiful write Connie...Congrats on your win...

Lu Loo

Date: 8/30/2016 3:25:00 PM

Connie, just beautiful lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2016 2:35:00 PM

I knew I would be back with congratulations, Connie!:) You deserve this podium finish! Regards // paul

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/30/2016 8:30:00 AM

A really radiant appeal this piece carries!! Congrats Connie, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 8/29/2016 9:47:00 PM

Huge Congrats!

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/29/2016 7:07:00 PM

Hi Connie, It's so good to see you on the winners list. This was lovely. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Lin Lane

Date: 8/29/2016 6:33:00 PM

I knew I'd see this one high on the list. Congratulations on a lovely nature monorhyme, Connie.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/29/2016 6:45:00 PM

Oh, thank you Lin. Someone told me they didn't care for it, but I know monorhyme's are not for everyone. Still after they told me that, I had little hope of it making the list, so I am very pleased it is high on the list. I appreciate your support Lin. I loved yours as you know. Cheers, Connie ; )

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 8/29/2016 4:20:00 PM

Congratulations on this lovely monorhyme.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/29/2016 4:15:00 PM

Congrats!!! Connie...very well done my friend...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton

Date: 8/29/2016 2:40:00 PM

Fantastic write Connie, loved the imagery and imagination used in this piece, top quality! Congrats on a fine win!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/30/2016 1:44:00 AM

John, I was thrilled to be given such a high placement in your contest with the many other excellent entries you receiived. So thank you so very much! Cheers, Connie ; )

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/29/2016 2:38:00 PM

Congrats, Connie :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/29/2016 2:37:00 PM

Oh the imagery - I just adore this poem. Congrats on your placement! CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/29/2016 6:46:00 PM

Thank you very much CayCay! ; )

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 8/29/2016 6:35:00 AM

Vivid portrayal of day melting into night! Best wishes for the contest! Sushma

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/26/2016 2:07:00 PM

So tranquil and peaceful, I love how the photos so match to this poem!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/27/2016 3:24:00 AM

I got them from Bing Arthur and was happy to get such a close match to my poem. Thank you Arthur. ; )

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/26/2016 12:18:00 PM

beautiful poetry from a beautiful poetess! truly - beauty in each line, Connie ... CayCay (i don't know why i'm not doing caps) (oh, i'm good, even when gone, i am somehow here with ya!)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/27/2016 3:18:00 AM

Nice to see your sweet face here visiting me CayCay. I know how busy you are right now. Thank you for your lovely comment! ; )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/26/2016 1:44:00 AM

i like the study in contrast along with such rhythmic flow and tonality, connie... a winner fo me!..huggs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/26/2016 3:33:00 AM

I appreciate your understanding of the poem Nette. Thank you very much. ; )

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/25/2016 9:31:00 PM

Beautiful. Good luck on the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/27/2016 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Agnes. I can use the luck with my recent N/A's. ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2016 7:46:00 PM

Connie, do you remember when I wrote a really long one about the moon and its glory? This reminds me of my thoughts but in a sweet condensed form and adding in the wonderful sun!! You did a great job, dearie.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/26/2016 3:36:00 AM

You have written a few about the moon Andrea.Not sure which one? Actually this poem concentrates more on my favorite time of day or night which is twilight. Thank you Andrea. ; )

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/25/2016 5:55:00 PM

Yes Connie, the ebb and flow of day and night. I like when the sun and moon are both visible at the same time. You have to know where to look. You are a child of nature and so cool!!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/25/2016 10:25:00 PM

I do have a romance with nature Duke. The best gifts are free right before us morning and night! Thank you Duke. It is always nice to hear from you. ; )

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/25/2016 4:16:00 PM

A 7 for this lovely, descriptive poem, Connie! Janice

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/25/2016 10:58:00 PM

Wow...thank you so much Janice. I do love nature and enjoy writing about it. ; )