Sun Shines On the Righteous - For Contest

There was a cloud hung over him
a presence, an impending doom.
He seemed one lightning strike away
from enlightenment - or entombment.
Haunted by the stigma of divine dissatisfaction
a wanderer in a spiritual maelstrom
questioning the questions of the questioners,
thinking on the thoughts of the thinkers,
worshiping at the edges of heresy,
praying for the efficacy of his prayers.
Hidden in the silence of life’s tomb
innocence interred beneath this “cloud”.

The sun never shone, the rain never fell,
on the unrighteousness of the righteous.



4/10/2016

//This turned into a "Free Verse Sonnet".  Hope it works.//

submitted to – Sun shines on the righteous – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Seren Roberts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/12/2016 7:35:00 PM
I've read many of your poems. You're a much deeper thinker than I am. Some of poems remind me of Wallace Stevens. Thank you for stopping by to read me. Best to you in your writing endeavors. . M
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John Lawless
Date: 8/12/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thank you Maurice, always nice to hear from you.
Date: 4/28/2016 12:06:00 AM
JOHN, awesome sunshine theme... LINDA
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John Lawless
Date: 8/12/2016 8:53:00 PM
thanks Linda, sorry for the delay in responding, I kinda got lost in the shuffle of the poetry soup changes regarding notifications and such. Always appreciate your input.
Date: 4/19/2016 10:45:00 PM
Congrats on yet another awesome win John..
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John Lawless
Date: 8/12/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma with apologies for my delayed response.
Date: 4/11/2016 2:54:00 PM
John, Sonnet or Free Verse Sonnet, it reads beautiful to me, and I am loving it 7 ~
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John Lawless
Date: 4/11/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thanks for the high mark and praise BW, your support and input are always anticipated and appreciated.
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