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Sun Shimmering O'Er Frothy Snow

Sun shimmering o’er frothy snow Like faeries glimmer In far fantasy lands a-glow, Shimmying they slither. Crystals are glistening Nature is listening; Soul is awakening, ‘Tis quite a spectacular show Sun shimmering o’er frothy snow. FIRST PLACE WINNER written February 3, 2022 especially for "Quietus (January 2022)" Poetry Contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker syllables checked by PS Syllable Counter

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2022 3:41:00 PM

Your entry probably had some of the best imagery, Milt. Big congrats on a big win.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/22/2022 4:18:00 PM

Ah, thanks so much, Andrea. I really enjoyed writing this poem in this form.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/20/2022 9:54:00 AM

Love the title and the perfect rhyming, Milt. Congratulations on another win! Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/22/2022 4:18:00 PM

Thanks so much, Bill.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/20/2022 4:54:00 AM

Thank you for participating Milt … congrats on your win, hope you enjoyed the Quietus form!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/22/2022 4:18:00 PM

Thank you. I enjoyed writing the Quietus form very much, U.S.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/7/2022 11:24:00 AM

I can feel and see this frothy, shimmering snow. Superb alliterative write Hank.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/7/2022 11:58:00 AM

Thanks so much, Caren. I really appreciate your comments.

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/4/2022 5:38:00 AM

It also creates the stuff of a beautiful poem! Your images flatter and I feel that I can really see it! Well done Milt and best of luck in the contest!!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/4/2022 8:33:00 AM

Mike, I truly appreciate your read and your kind compliment on this poem. Have a marvelous weekend, friend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/4/2022 3:11:00 AM

Lovely image Milton, I can see that glistening scene shining like tiny diamonds. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/4/2022 8:35:00 AM

Yes, Tom. It happens frequently after a heavy snow when the sun comes out. Looks like millions of diamonds glistening.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/3/2022 5:05:00 PM

You penned a stunning poem, Milt. Your wonderful metaphors and fantastic wording shed more enchantment on your shining poem. Best wishes in the contest.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/3/2022 5:21:00 PM

Thanks so much, Lasaad. I'm hoping for the best!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/3/2022 3:27:00 PM

Your poem sparkles and shines, it reads fine, fine fine, gl Milton :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/3/2022 3:48:00 PM

Thanks so much, Mystic. I think this is one of the better pieces I have written recently. It was several days in development.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 2/3/2022 2:58:00 PM

I like it! I'm new here, saw your referencing of the contest at the bottom of the poem and realize I forgot to do that! Also, not meant as a criticism, but does line 2 need an extra syllable? Not sure how 'faeries' pronounced, 2 or 3 syllables. If the latter, just ignore! And feel free to delete this comment if you prefer!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/3/2022 3:51:00 PM

I wouldn't dream of deleting your comment, Jeff. I always welcome any suggestions on my poems. I checked the first four lines with Poetry Soup syllable counter and it says they are okay...8-6-8-6. Thanks for the heads up because I double-checked it. It's just an alternative spelling, pronounced "fa-er-ies" which is three syllables. So glad you mentioned this. Go back to the contest and edit, adding the information, although I'm not sure that is required by the sponsor. I do it as a matter of habit.