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Sun Shimmering O'Er Frothy Snow

Sun shimmering o’er frothy snow
Like faeries glimmer
In far fantasy lands a-glow,
Shimmying they slither.

Crystals are glistening
Nature is listening;
Soul is awakening,

‘Tis quite a spectacular show
Sun shimmering o’er frothy snow.

FIRST PLACE WINNER
written February 3, 2022
especially for "Quietus (January 2022)" Poetry Contest
sponsored by Unseeking Seeker
syllables checked by PS Syllable Counter

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Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2022 at 3:41 PM

Your entry probably had some of the best imagery, Milt. Big congrats on a big win.

L Milton Hankins

February 22, 2022 at 4:18 PM

Ah, thanks so much, Andrea. I really enjoyed writing this poem in this form.

Bill Baker

February 20, 2022 at 9:54 AM

Love the title and the perfect rhyming, Milt. Congratulations on another win! Bill

L Milton Hankins

February 22, 2022 at 4:18 PM

Thanks so much, Bill.

Unseeking Seeker

February 20, 2022 at 4:54 AM

Thank you for participating Milt … congrats on your win, hope you enjoyed the Quietus form!

L Milton Hankins

February 22, 2022 at 4:18 PM

Thank you. I enjoyed writing the Quietus form very much, U.S.

Caren Krutsinger

February 7, 2022 at 11:24 AM

I can feel and see this frothy, shimmering snow. Superb alliterative write Hank.

L Milton Hankins

February 7, 2022 at 11:58 AM

Thanks so much, Caren. I really appreciate your comments.

Mike Gentile

February 4, 2022 at 5:38 AM

It also creates the stuff of a beautiful poem! Your images flatter and I feel that I can really see it! Well done Milt and best of luck in the contest!!

L Milton Hankins

February 4, 2022 at 8:33 AM

Mike, I truly appreciate your read and your kind compliment on this poem. Have a marvelous weekend, friend!

Tom Cunningham

February 4, 2022 at 3:11 AM

Lovely image Milton, I can see that glistening scene shining like tiny diamonds. Tom

L Milton Hankins

February 4, 2022 at 8:35 AM

Yes, Tom. It happens frequently after a heavy snow when the sun comes out. Looks like millions of diamonds glistening.

Sotto Poet

February 3, 2022 at 5:05 PM

You penned a stunning poem, Milt. Your wonderful metaphors and fantastic wording shed more enchantment on your shining poem. Best wishes in the contest.

L Milton Hankins

February 3, 2022 at 5:21 PM

Thanks so much, Lasaad. I'm hoping for the best!

Mystic Rose Rose

February 3, 2022 at 3:27 PM

Your poem sparkles and shines, it reads fine, fine fine, gl Milton :)

L Milton Hankins

February 3, 2022 at 3:48 PM

Thanks so much, Mystic. I think this is one of the better pieces I have written recently. It was several days in development.

Jeff Kyser

February 3, 2022 at 2:58 PM

I like it! I'm new here, saw your referencing of the contest at the bottom of the poem and realize I forgot to do that! Also, not meant as a criticism, but does line 2 need an extra syllable? Not sure how 'faeries' pronounced, 2 or 3 syllables. If the latter, just ignore! And feel free to delete this comment if you prefer!

L Milton Hankins

February 3, 2022 at 3:51 PM

I wouldn't dream of deleting your comment, Jeff. I always welcome any suggestions on my poems. I checked the first four lines with Poetry Soup syllable counter and it says they are okay...8-6-8-6. Thanks for the heads up because I double-checked it. It's just an alternative spelling, pronounced "fa-er-ies" which is three syllables. So glad you mentioned this. Go back to the contest and edit, adding the information, although I'm not sure that is required by the sponsor. I do it as a matter of habit.

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