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Sun Rays

S u n R a y s \ On my bare / shoulders, warming my core being, life entering in vessels pumping into nothing the zeal and zest of a four year old. Random thoughts blur, haze erases dread of the day ~~~~~~ and dread of the night, dread of close encounters ~~~~~~ with human emotions to hoist me out of this low hole of self absorbtion, entertained, to overcome the Realization of left-over, warmed over life forgotten As a desirable passion of life, and the opposite sex. Forgotten as a life form at all by the unimportant clueless slugs- dregs of the sea floor. / \ S u n R a y s

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/1/2009 3:51:00 AM
Wow. nicely done. RdP
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Date: 11/30/2009 7:56:00 PM
great job with this shape poem....D.
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:25:00 PM
This poem is really neat.I like it.I am glad that song helped I love the words to it
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:41:00 PM
Dear Doris Excellent shape and the message is Awesome Vivid descriptions YOU are a Joy to read ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:40:00 PM
Sun rays and Son rays do warm us both emotionally and spiritually. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:56:00 PM
Interesting write her Doris... I like the shape, good form... Nice.... I have a response to your tag, as does the poet I tagged... Check em out.......:JP]
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