Sun Priest

Altar made of clouds, Ministering to the earth: Reverend of day.

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Justin Hensley

Date: 11/11/2010 9:23:00 AM

very beautiful i can just image it in front of me.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2010 10:07:00 AM

I can see it Raul. Magnificent. Love, Carol

Amy Green

Date: 3/22/2010 11:55:00 PM

This is amazing, truly. I loved it... You have mail.

Marty Owens

Date: 3/22/2010 9:55:00 PM

Wonderful inspiring Haiku...enjoyed...Marty

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/22/2010 8:45:00 PM

great job Raul. these poems spark the mind to think and inspire visuals of nature that are so beautiful....

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/22/2010 5:49:00 PM

Wonderful Raul..but then you always are. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2010 4:55:00 PM

Interesting take on nature in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

Mitch White

Date: 3/22/2010 4:28:00 PM

Excellent Haiku Raul

Date: 3/22/2010 4:27:00 PM

What an uplifting poem. You certainly made the most of your words for an insightful perspective. Blessings to you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/22/2010 3:15:00 PM

enjoyed reading

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/22/2010 3:12:00 PM

VERY NICE HAIKU LOVED IT FALESHIA