Sun On Treetops

When the sun gently kisses horizon
 Bouncing and bubbling with firey red cheeks
Signals  morn on memory  emblazon
While sunlight dances, my love soft lips seeks

Aroma of coffee wafts on morn's air
As the dove's quiet cooing, their love to seek
Sun on treetops has red kisses to share
Lover_ in morn's sunbeams snuggles will sneak

Delight the sun has brought; wind kisses sought
Great day_ animals rejoice; as sunbeams
Lighting, enlighting, delighting, free thought
Good mornings are filled with many daydreams

While old lovers touch blushing cheek to cheek
Nights are for sleeping ; dreams_lovers for morn
When embrace again_ under covers peek
As the sun kisses horizon love's born

(Rhyming scheme a,b,a, b)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 8:00 PM
A well deserved win, SAra, wonderful good morning poem! Luv, Andrea
Walters Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 6:09 PM
This is lovely!! Beautiful descriptions, congratulations on your win!! hugs, Kris
Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in Francine's contest with this super poem. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on you super win in the contest, Sara! Always, Annalise
Calhoun Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:27 AM
Hi Sara - Congratulations on your BIG win in Francine's contest. Such a beautiful rhyme! I loved it. Best wishes, KC
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 3:51 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
Omaidin Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations Sara, lovely to share joint 2nd with you. Déirdre
Onclaud Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 10:12 PM
special CHEERS for this fine win, sara!! always a pleasure to take this morning journey with you...:) hugs, nette
Roberts Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:31 PM
such a beautiful poem Sara, congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest
Mannan Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Sorry for the wrong name Sara.
Mannan Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 7:51 PM
A remarkable write dear Joyce. I loved the scene you described.many congratulations for this super win.
Richards Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Just lovely Sara.....Yours is a poem of love of life, of each other, and the early morning sunrise!!
Gorelick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Congrats on your win with this beauty BG
Johnson Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations Sara on yet another win. Lovely words. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:16 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your big win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Congrats Sara on your big win in the Good Morning contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot and thankxx for sharing your experience on my The Light today... it is awesome to know someone who actually had this happen to them.. I am fascinated by this ... luv to u ...
Bagnall Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 5:00 AM
A very pleasant read, keep writing the daydreams down ! Enjoyed.
Anderson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Very nice poem Sara...Jimmy
Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 11:10 AM
We love and love so differently as we grow older, but we are never to old to love. To have a love in the first place makes it always memorable....:)
Devonshire Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 10:03 AM
So many welcome images of morning in your poem, Sara. You painted a heartwarming scene in your lovely poem. Best wishes in the "Good Morning" contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:39 AM
What a nice way to greet the early morning, Sara! Coffee always uplifts my day! Really enjoyed your poem today. Have a nice one...gert
Sweetheart Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 7:37 AM
thankxxx Sara on this snowy Sunday .. appreciate your warm comments on my contest entries ..hope everyone is feeling blessed today with luv..
Docherty Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 1:46 AM
Love this and could almost be there picturing the views listening to the sounds and tasting that lovely roasted coffee blend! Thanks for you lovely comments, good to see you around...
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 11:06 PM
This is very pretty. It seems to be some kind of form. Very intersting to read, SAra!
Flach Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 3:26 PM
And, yet, I think I understand this one, Sara. Nicely done. May all you rmornings be welcomed by the sun. Red kisses from the sky; wet kisses from your guy. Joe
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