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Sun Moon One Hot One Not Day and Night Light-

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Sun and Moon out together

dark lit planets skies it is so bright very high ~round stars so glaring both rife calms planets shine ~one great light the other less 6/2/21 1st place placement in Contest FOR TANKA POETRY CONTEST Sponsored by: M.L. KISER

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/27/2021 7:13:00 AM
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Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/4/2021 5:19:00 PM
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great contrast! Congrats, James.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 4:31:00 PM
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James, congrats on your 1st place win with this astral tanka! Blessings, Kim M
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/4/2021 2:27:00 AM
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Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, exposing greatness of the Creator through His granted lights. God bless you.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 6/4/2021 4:33:00 AM
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O' the God of the greater and lesser light Shines ever bright God circumference the darkness plight Days sun-Moons night Jehovah Father God is the eternal brightest light~ Blessings and Peace to you Beata : ) James
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/3/2021 3:25:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win, Charlotte, in M.L Tanka poetry contest. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 6/4/2021 4:20:00 AM
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Thank-You Eve for your kind comments ! Write on James
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/3/2021 10:03:00 AM
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A Beautiful Song. Congratulations!
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 6/4/2021 4:15:00 AM
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Thank-you, Christuraj. Write on!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/3/2021 9:37:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win James Edward. This is truly an astral song. All the best.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 6/4/2021 4:14:00 AM
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Much obliged there Sam. I thank you very much! For your gratitude~ James

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