Sun King

Valsa wrote a pithy prayer poem That recalled my old Hindu man As Jesus is a jealous Lord, groom See John's Revelation. Yet each human Must know how others see stars, moon ... And I, new man through Holy Spirit say - The sun is King, but God's deputy In one of numerous provinces That populate a universe, no longer lonely ELOHIM, Creator-God, filled the sky with debris -- Let's make it "atmosphere" -- that can reflect Light in so many spectra. Ours the visible Spectrum ... But gamma, Xray, ultraviolet, radio ... Remain to be seen, if we invented new eyes - or a special pair of glasses for humans, earth guys!

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Joe Dimino

Date: 2/3/2022 2:46:00 PM

Many suns, and each eye sees theirs a bit differently...as there are countless moons and earths to receive infinite spectrum of light. I often marvel at the silliness of science searching for the God Particle, as yet to realize that the more one puts into a system for seeking the more that will come out. It would be so much more satisfying to begin with a whole, unbroken, immortal and unlimited -- and then simply allow that greatness to reveal itself according to need through imagination?

Anil Deo
Date: 2/3/2022 2:57:00 PM

Dear Sir, to receive such response, readers, dialog ... A blessing. Or put another way, sends me over the moon (Not too close to sun Icarus!)