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SUN DAY A Sun Day Beautiful A Pick Me Up I Sip On My Cup Suddenly Clouds Appear Rain Splashes Like Spit On Glass HailThundersAndHitsTheEarthHard I Cower At This Sudden Display My Thoughts Dampened By Catastrophe my coffee cup tReMbLeS upon table brown and creamy waves lap over the edge asuddenchill IMNOTALONE! a flurry of silver angels wings like birds
Am I In The Center ofthestorm centrifugal force
shoves me to the side like an amusement park ride i come crashing down my hand pushes against my cup sPiLLinG the remainder of its contents onto a pure white page
I laugh my imagination sure took a spin i gaze out the glass at the gathering clouds the alarm goes off did i oversleep the wind picks up speed w i l l t h i s NIGHTMARE NEVER END my pen feverish red ink sleep i n e e d s l ee p 8/23/2017

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Date: 8/24/2017 8:33:00 AM
WoW!...nicely crafted Kim...god bless...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2017 9:16:00 AM
God bless U 2! Thank you, WW!
Date: 8/24/2017 1:39:00 AM
Wonderful. It was a feast for the mind and eyes! Loved how you drew me along the lines, dear. Loved the imagery and the thunder of your thoughts. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2017 6:54:00 AM
Thanks, Eileen! :)
Date: 8/23/2017 3:18:00 PM
Wow, this poem as every thing, love this Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thanks, Harry :)
Date: 8/23/2017 2:31:00 PM
Love the art in your poems, Kim--love the ending!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2017 2:32:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay :)
Date: 8/23/2017 12:56:00 PM
What was in that cup Kim? Wow! Crazy day. And "spit on the glass" ? You pulled out a lot of stops for this organ solo. You are an amazing writer! What an imagination!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2017 1:01:00 PM
Thanks, Dean! Glad you enjoyed.

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