Sun Dance

sun silhouette slides sinking in serenading cotton candy clouds baptized in ocean white flight of sea gulls glowing like stars of sun dance

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/16/2024 9:08:00 PM

Pretty as a picture imagery, Karen. Kind of takes my breath away, I may say. Fabulous haikus! :) gw

Karen Jones
Date: 11/16/2024 9:25:00 PM

Thank you sweetie! :0)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/16/2024 9:35:00 AM

Love the two haiku which are very descriptive that you visualize both of these. love phyl

Karen Jones
Date: 11/16/2024 10:56:00 AM

Glad you took precious time to read them Phyllis! Thanks!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/16/2024 7:28:00 AM

Your "sun dance" is a fun Haiku write with cotton candy clouds. I enjoyed reading it... Have a fun day/weekend................

Karen Jones
Date: 11/16/2024 10:55:00 AM

Thanks Paula! You as well!

Tom Woody

Date: 11/16/2024 5:41:00 AM

Hey great haikus, especially the first which had awesome alliteration. You don't see that often

Karen Jones
Date: 11/16/2024 5:57:00 AM

Thanks Tom! You are kind.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/16/2024 5:20:00 AM

The sun comes alive with its many reflections noticed. Dancing for our eyes to see and enjoy. Thanks for sharing...

Karen Jones
Date: 11/16/2024 5:23:00 AM

Hugs Michael!