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Sun-Block - Joseph Osita

SUN-BLOCK ( Collaboration with Joseph Osita ) by~JOSEPH OSITA & I~LINDA (p.d.) Your sunset-sanctioned skin ignite melody to boredom world Your gently pearling smile charm the attention of morning sun. Your charmed souls burn in nuclear passion To absorb the bombardment of your ink You are the unsolved mystery of existence ~pd~ The sunrises 10 feet off the ground ~**~ This place carried the eternal light I need for my soul to soar. ~**~ Like the clouds every poet brush away my blues with one simple smile ~**~ Writing ignited my heartbeat to flicker like a candlewick non-stop. ~pd~ I hold that piece of puzzle that makes my existence complete Elegantly you walk, Venus-like Printing glory-of-gods on excited earth Holding hostage your admirers' eyes With your Gabriel-censored attire You are truly the mystery of existence ~pd~ My eyes I keep holding on tight. ~**~ Gathering dangerous looks, from every poets eyes. ~**~ Striking like a speed of thunder bolt, ~**~ I fell weak like an addict to my admires streak of rays' ~pd~ I'm the piece of puzzle that makes my own existence complete Oh beautiful empress of poetry soup. Wake thy muse and shake off the dust of block Your fans are in inferno hunger of your welded words Feed us again, your poetic meal that somersault the arrows of critic For you are the unsolved mystery of existence ~pd~ A great source to gather the best light here on the soup. ~**~ I found my heart beating like a rush~ spontaneous ~**~ Imaging every poem that helps me get lost in the moment ~**~ I wrote against and among the best to be like the rest ~pd~ For I'm that unsolved piece of puzzle that makes my existence complete You are kinder than nature, more hospitable than mother earth Man and woman scramble for shelter in your cheerful hearts For your contest, all thoughts erect pines of words With rush of the sea storm P.D. (( I., Linda )) is the unsolved mystery of existence ~pd~ losing myself to reality, this is not like me to fall into deep. ~**~ Times maybe hard, not even a simple song to poet my mind. ~**~ The truth is, the sun has blinded me with love, and I have no SUN-BLOCK ~**~ Until my instincts tell me otherwise, I'll find my way back to all my fans ~pd~ I (~LINDA) am responsible for the happiness of my mysterious existence. A collaboration with * JOSEPH OSITA ~my collaboration contest~ BY : JOSEPH & MYSELF

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2016 10:55:00 PM
beach time **SKAT**
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Date: 1/12/2013 2:10:00 PM
Linda when one reads poems like this,, when the inner you comes pouring out and splashes on to paper... one can only dream of the day you will once again return...
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:12:00 AM
you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!
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Date: 8/17/2011 4:02:00 PM
Wow! Linda, you did excellently well. Do you know I had to read it over and over. I'm truly happy for our effort!.I didnt know you have posted the work. This technical problem on soup is really dwindling my poetry activities. Have a wonderful day, Linda
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Date: 8/17/2011 11:14:00 AM
this is really fantastic.. PD, i look forward to collaborating with you.
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Date: 8/15/2011 8:25:00 AM
I see alittle sizzle in this work....well done!! Pour me some coffee the bacon is done!
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:47:00 PM
wow, you really got into this one with JOseph. What is with the Linda line, PD? Lots of beautiful lines through both your work! Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 8/14/2011 5:55:00 PM
my second favorite .. excluding my own with u as second.. oh.. a dilemma...
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:49:00 PM
well I think this one is my second fav PD my BFF.. had a power blackout all night from horrible thunder and lightening storms up and down the Jersey Coast seashoe areas ..power just returned and the temp went from high 90's to 70 overnight..bbbrrr... have read most of the collabs if not all but have not been on PS so much with all the issues and problems they are having with hackers invading the site.. it is awful now.... talk soon luv.. your BFF forever..
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:49:00 PM
of course u know my first choice is the one u did with the White Knight of PS. Michael my luv..yes..
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Date: 8/14/2011 1:35:00 PM
hey p.d. this is very intense, well done to both of you,...do you really have a mysterious existence, ha ha... really warm here, but Texas sounds the place to be..... have a great day.......David.... hope you are not having the same problems as i am having logging on, it's driving me nuts......
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Date: 8/14/2011 12:20:00 PM
The beams of love are indeed strong. Your mysterious existence is a pleasure for me and many others. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:26:00 AM
I have to be honest.. This one actually took me a long time to compare. The longest hour ever. In writing~ but, i was delighted that it was about me not being here on the soup as much and my semi-writers block'' made me a bit sad for a while. I really miss it here. I want to return so bad, but life has me by the nose...lol... what ever that means..Anyways~ Thank you Joseph.... This was an excitement to work on. God bless all,...p.d.
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:20:00 AM
ohhh, a disarming dialogue that fills up all senses.. right on with the glory of a sun tan!!.. totally engaging! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/14/2011 6:29:00 AM
yes.. nette... SUN-BLOCK..IS A METAPHORIC way of disguising my **SEMI-LAZY- WRITERS BLOCK** << ---- LOL... I DIAGNOSED MYSELF.... hahhaha

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