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Sun and Sand Minichu

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The sun and sand invites Come and rest, bring your poetry notebook, find your calm place See the sights Write poetry fine Stay, clear your thoughts in this whist space Align Bird calls Waves, their paces Drawl The sun and sand invites Stay, clear your thoughts in this whist space Drawl Written: 02/01/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/8/2021 9:59:00 PM

I want to draw and write and write and draw at the beach. Congrats!

Marilene Evans

Date: 2/5/2021 4:43:00 PM

Congrats! Sometimes, we just need a moment of calmness. Nicely done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/6/2021 5:50:00 AM

Marilene, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. I appreciate the time spent here. Everyday I need a little time of calm. Sara..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2021 1:17:00 PM

I see you got a win. So back with my congrats. I had liked this one the best of the two you posted I think.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2021 2:58:00 PM

Andrea, Your presence at my page is uplifting. I did get a place. Someday I might get a big win. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 2/3/2021 10:47:00 PM

Great one for the contest, Sara, congratulations on your win. The warn sand with cool breeze embrace a round, sitting on a blanket looking out towards the ocean at the ships and fishing boats as seagull hover to get a bite. Great imagery for writing. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2021 4:55:00 AM

Eve, I thought about the sitting on a blanket and thought who would get me up??? LOL..Senior physiology ...LOL..I would definitely have to have a chair of some kind. I do enjoy all those things about the beach though. Last time we went I looked at it from the sliding glass window or the balcony. Thanks for stopping by with congrats, Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/3/2021 9:54:00 PM

Great poetry Sara, i see you made a mistake for the contest. Still i regard this as a winner.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2021 3:56:00 AM

Harry, Yes, I corrected my mistake so the mistake is no longer there. Just an error in not checking my work for one more time. Not really familiar with this form. I guess I need to write several more to familiarize myself with it but the number of syllables per line would have to be looked up each time. Your presence at my page is uplifting. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 7:10:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Sara! Linda

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2021 7:43:00 AM

Linda, I am delighted you stopped by with congrats. Sara

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/3/2021 6:02:00 AM

so serene!! like the first kiss of sun on the creamy sand...Lovely Sara. Blessings..Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2021 7:39:00 AM

JCB, I am glad you liked this one. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 3:45:00 AM

Sara, Thanks for participating in my contest. All good with your Minichu except the alignment of rhyme of middle line of the third stanza with first two. Still, congrats for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2021 7:32:00 AM

Thanks for dropping back by. I don't expect you to change my place. I like that you told me what was wrong so that I could make a change. Sara

Mohan Chutani
Date: 2/3/2021 5:34:00 AM

Now it reads fine. I wish I could revise your placement. Anyway, there will be more opportunities. Hope keeping fine in the new year. Warm regards, Mohan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2021 5:07:00 AM

Mohan, Your dropping by to tell me I placed is appreciated. I guess that I forgot to rhyme that line..Senior Moments happening more often. I will have to try to write another one and see what happens. Sara..I corrected that line so it will read better and be correct just in case someone looks at it to write one.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/2/2021 6:54:00 AM

Great theme for the contest... I enjoyed it... Good luck in the contest...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/2/2021 8:07:00 AM

Supraja, Thanks for dropping by with well wishes. Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/2/2021 3:17:00 AM

Love this. It beckons my soul... love it. God bless you with a win. Love and prayers, Gina

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/2/2021 6:28:00 AM

Regina, I am glad that it beckons your soul. I want to go back to the beach as soon as we can be free but how many others will want to be in the same place. LOL..Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/2/2021 2:19:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this Sara...you never did forget your poetry notebook.. loved it.. I haven't tried this form.. Hugs ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/2/2021 6:23:00 AM

Anitha, I have gone off without it and I would have to find a piece of paper or a napkin or something to write down a thought or idea for a poem. Your presence at my page is uplifting. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/2/2021 1:04:00 AM

A new form but you go the hang of it. Best for a win. ~~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/2/2021 6:16:00 AM

Victor, Well, I would have to look it up and write it all down again then struggle to write another one. LOL..Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2021 4:06:00 PM

love that word drawl. Excellent choice for the last word! Why not say Birds call, so then it will be a perfect rhyme!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/2/2021 4:17:00 PM

call and drawl are both two-syllable words. But calls does not exactly rhyme with drawls because of the S.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/2/2021 6:13:00 AM

Andrea, I think it is suppose to be only one syllable. I may have it wrong. LOL..Thanks for dropping by. Sara