Charmaine Chircop Poet Lyric

Sun and Moon

. I am the moon

hanging solitary in the sky

watching sails fluttering by

breathlessly against the wind.

I'm just a rock ,dark,unknown

without a light that is my own.

Yet He ,He sees hues I cannot see

and the true colours in me.

He, He is familiar to my face 

This  face that shines less brightly

without his full embrace.

He is the sun, He is the one

Never so close , always too far

yet still staying behind me .

He casts his softest glow

reflecting orange and soul,

He penetrates his warmth

A fire ball of wants ,

Then fades ,fades away in the horizon.

He is the sun, He is the one

in a universe of nothingness .

He fills our gaps,hopes and regrets

Never so close ,always too far

yet still staying behind me.

I am the moon ,He is the sun

He is the one...He is the one 

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Tim Smith June 8, 2016 at 9:36 PM one of my all time favorites....thank you

Keith Bickerstaffe December 18, 2015 at 2:54 PM '...he is the one,' beautifully crafted and rendered. Spectacular images and gentle language make this a pure pleasure to read and to review, BRAVO Charmaine! Best wishes, Keith

Darren Lee November 24, 2015 at 4:13 AM beautiful piece. it reminds me of a song I wrote called "I am a rock" I'll post it and let you have a read. you're a talented deep wordsmith, very enjoyable!

Matthew Anish November 23, 2015 at 4:47 PM Nice song of praise to the sun! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

David Meade November 18, 2015 at 5:08 PM I had to read this one again -- I love the play between the moon and sun. The setting of moon send promises of a sun raise. It is the love that binds the eternal motions of these heavenly bodies.

Richard Lamoureux November 17, 2015 at 9:50 AM Good morning Charmaine. Hugs Rick. Do drop by and visit, I always appreciate your invite full comments.

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2015 at 5:21 PM Oh, Charma, how I would love to visit Malta one day!! But I don't see how it would ever happen when it's all I can do just to go a few states over to see my family for thanksgiving!!

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2015 at 8:14 PM charma, just came by to say hello. I need to get off here soon. Too much to do even on Saturday. How are things going for you?

Eric Boddie November 13, 2015 at 4:08 PM the sun and moon....maybe the bride and groom....maybe the hand and glove....could be both, lust and Love....what about the foot and shoe....or maybe just maybe me and you....Beautiful as always Charmaine....;)

Cecilia Macfarlane November 12, 2015 at 5:43 PM This is awesome Charmaine....the sun always having the moon's back, very unique write, enjoyed very much. Hugs

Constance La France November 12, 2015 at 11:30 AM Charmaine, so wonderfully penned, a very pretty poem

Richard Lamoureux November 12, 2015 at 6:30 AM Good morning Charmaine.

Afolabi Muideen November 11, 2015 at 2:56 PM A very beautiful excellent write here. I love your subject it is very lovely............A.M.

James Marshall Goff November 5, 2015 at 8:40 PM Char, a wistful, creative poem....always a pleasure! I am sure you are having a magical time raising your Daugher! jimbo

John Fleming November 5, 2015 at 1:59 PM I truly did enjoy the read, Charmaine - A well deserved Seven! My very best regards! :) john P.s Congratulations on POTD!

Richard Lamoureux November 5, 2015 at 8:28 AM Good morning Charmaine.

Jack Ellison November 5, 2015 at 8:24 AM YEE HAW!!! POTD and well deserved my love! An amazing write but what else would I expect from such a sweet soul as you! ((hugs)) and love, Santa Jack xoxox

Elis Artis November 1, 2015 at 5:18 PM Congratulations on poem of the day:) Truly deserved! I enjoyed reading it from top to bottom

Kevin Leake October 31, 2015 at 2:16 PM Truly beautiful Charmaine, Another elegant write!!! Best Wishes Kevin

Liam Mcdaid October 31, 2015 at 10:27 AM congratulations on poem of the day very beautifully painted as always charmaine wishing you a blessed weekend dear pal

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2015 at 5:03 PM I just love how you kept repeating he is the one and how it rhymed with sun. This is so lovely, and the imagery of the fire ball of wants. AWesome, dear!!

Richard Lamoureux October 30, 2015 at 9:33 AM Reading the comments I see this is POTD. What a wonderous and deserving piece. Truly stunning Chatmaine.

Ken Carroll October 29, 2015 at 9:24 PM Splendid romantic write!

Robert Pettit October 29, 2015 at 5:49 PM This was a good choice for poem of the day.

Myles Home October 29, 2015 at 5:12 PM Hi Charmain, this is wonderful and a joy to read..I kept reading over and over.. well done.. I just put your poem in my fav..

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