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Sun and Moon

. I am the moon hanging solitary in the sky watching sails fluttering by breathlessly against the wind. I'm just a rock ,dark,unknown without a light that is my own. Yet He ,He sees hues I cannot see and the true colours in me. He, He is familiar to my face This face that shines less brightly without his full embrace. He is the sun, He is the one Never so close , always too far yet still staying behind me . He casts his softest glow reflecting orange and soul, He penetrates his warmth A fire ball of wants , Then fades ,fades away in the horizon. He is the sun, He is the one in a universe of nothingness . He fills our gaps,hopes and regrets Never so close ,always too far yet still staying behind me. I am the moon ,He is the sun He is the one...He is the one

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Date: 5/7/2017 5:46:00 PM
Hi Charmaine , beautiful Lyric , ' He fills our gaps, hopes and regrets ' spell binding :)) hugs
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Date: 6/8/2016 9:36:00 PM
one of my all time favorites....thank you
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Date: 12/18/2015 2:54:00 PM
'...he is the one,' beautifully crafted and rendered. Spectacular images and gentle language make this a pure pleasure to read and to review, BRAVO Charmaine! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/24/2015 4:13:00 AM
beautiful piece. it reminds me of a song I wrote called "I am a rock" I'll post it and let you have a read. you're a talented deep wordsmith, very enjoyable!
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Date: 11/23/2015 4:47:00 PM
Nice song of praise to the sun! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/18/2015 5:08:00 PM
I had to read this one again -- I love the play between the moon and sun. The setting of moon send promises of a sun raise. It is the love that binds the eternal motions of these heavenly bodies.
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:50:00 AM
Good morning Charmaine. Hugs Rick. Do drop by and visit, I always appreciate your invite full comments.
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Date: 11/15/2015 5:21:00 PM
Oh, Charma, how I would love to visit Malta one day!! But I don't see how it would ever happen when it's all I can do just to go a few states over to see my family for thanksgiving!!
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:14:00 PM
charma, just came by to say hello. I need to get off here soon. Too much to do even on Saturday. How are things going for you?
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Date: 11/13/2015 4:08:00 PM
the sun and moon....maybe the bride and groom....maybe the hand and glove....could be both, lust and Love....what about the foot and shoe....or maybe just maybe me and you....Beautiful as always Charmaine....;)
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Date: 11/12/2015 5:43:00 PM
This is awesome Charmaine....the sun always having the moon's back, very unique write, enjoyed very much. Hugs
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Date: 11/12/2015 11:30:00 AM
Charmaine, so wonderfully penned, a very pretty poem
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Date: 11/12/2015 6:30:00 AM
Good morning Charmaine.
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:56:00 PM
A very beautiful excellent write here. I love your subject it is very lovely............A.M.
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Date: 11/5/2015 8:40:00 PM
Char, a wistful, creative poem....always a pleasure! I am sure you are having a magical time raising your Daugher! jimbo
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:59:00 PM
I truly did enjoy the read, Charmaine - A well deserved Seven! My very best regards! :) john P.s Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/5/2015 8:28:00 AM
Good morning Charmaine.
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Date: 11/5/2015 8:24:00 AM
YEE HAW!!! POTD and well deserved my love! An amazing write but what else would I expect from such a sweet soul as you! ((hugs)) and love, Santa Jack xoxox
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Date: 11/1/2015 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day:) Truly deserved! I enjoyed reading it from top to bottom
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Date: 10/31/2015 2:16:00 PM
Truly beautiful Charmaine, Another elegant write!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 10/31/2015 10:27:00 AM
congratulations on poem of the day very beautifully painted as always charmaine wishing you a blessed weekend dear pal
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Date: 10/30/2015 5:03:00 PM
I just love how you kept repeating he is the one and how it rhymed with sun. This is so lovely, and the imagery of the fire ball of wants. AWesome, dear!!
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Date: 10/30/2015 9:33:00 AM
Reading the comments I see this is POTD. What a wonderous and deserving piece. Truly stunning Chatmaine.
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Date: 10/29/2015 9:24:00 PM
Splendid romantic write!
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Date: 10/29/2015 5:49:00 PM
This was a good choice for poem of the day.
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