Sun-Block

SUN-BLOCK


Your sunset-sanctioned skin ignite melody to boredom world
Your gently pearling smile charm the attention of morning sun.
Your charmed souls burn in nuclear passion
To absorb the bombardment of your ink
You are the unsolved mystery of existence 
                
                By pd
The sunrises 10 feet off the ground
This place carried the eternal light I need for my soul to soar.
Like the clouds every poet brush away my blues with one simple smile
Writing ignited my heartbeat to flicker like a candlewick non-stop.
I hold that piece of puzzle that makes my existence complete
              
               
Elegantly you walk, Venus-like
Printing glory-of-gods on excited earth
Holding hostage your admirers' eyes
With your Gabriel-censored attire
You are truly the mystery of existence  
            
               By pd
My eyes I keep holding on tight.
Gathering dangerous looks, from every poets eyes.
Striking like a speed of thunder bolt, 
I fell weak like an addict to my admires streak of rays'
I'm the piece of puzzle that makes my own existence complete

Oh beautiful empress of poetry soup.
Wake thy muse and shake off the dust of block
Your fans are in inferno hunger of your welded words
Feed us again, your poetic meal that somersault the arrows of critic
For you are the unsolved mystery of existence    
 
                 By pd
A great source to gather the best light here on the soup.
I found my heart beating like a rush~ spontaneous 
Imaging every poem that helps me get lost in the moment
I wrote against and among the best to be like the rest
For I'm that unsolved piece of puzzle that makes my existence complete


You are kinder than nature, more hospitable than mother earth
Man and woman scramble for shelter in your cheerful hearts
For your contest, all thoughts erect pines of words
With rush of the sea storm
P.D. ((  Linda ))  is the unsolved mystery of existence  



                   By pd
Losing myself to reality, this is not like me to fall into deep.
Times maybe hard, not even a simple song to poet my mind.
The truth is, the sun has blinded me with love, and I have no SUN-BLOCK
Until my instincts tells me otherwise, I will find my way back to all my fans * true or not
I (IRMA~LINDA) am responsible for the happiness of my mysterious existence.


BY : JOSEPH & LINDA
For Pd's  collab with me contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/6/2011 7:16:00 PM
"charm the attention of morning sun" - a stunning line. good luck in the contest. p.s post something new when you get a chance...your fans are waiting :P
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Date: 8/29/2011 2:15:00 PM
thanks, keep keeping the pen...
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:36:00 AM
Good attempt,Joseph.A great entry for the contest..........Fabiyas
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:52:00 AM
a multi-faceted piece that brings much richness to the that mysterious existence... cheers joseph and P.D... :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/19/2011 8:02:00 AM
Great collaboration....reads like a winner...best of luck in the contest Joseph!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 8/18/2011 10:40:00 PM
COOL collaboration, JOseph. I can see how you greatly admire PD and she is really sweet (if I can ever figure out who she is. First she is Irma, then Linda, and I still was thinking she was Sydney!)
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Date: 8/17/2011 3:09:00 PM
wow Joseph..I already read this on PD's body of poetry and good luck in the contest... one of my favs as I told PD..so enjoyed this creativity luv..
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