David Kavanagh Poet Rhyme

Summing Up By a Sloth

I’m not here, just to make up life’s numbers 
     I’m here, because I found a niche to chill 
     Through hustle and bustle, I can slumber 
  And whilst you count sheep, I’ll be snoring still 

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David Kavanagh

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Linda Alice Fowler August 11, 2022 at 10:13 AM Back with big congratulations on your win David! Linda David Kavanagh August 11, 2022 at 10:48 AM Thank you so much Linda, I was absolutely delighted with the win, cheers David

Valsa George August 2, 2022 at 11:16 PM Once more to this hilarious snippet of a poem to Congratulate you David ! David Kavanagh August 3, 2022 at 1:23 AM You’re Far too kind Valsa, but the sloth isn’t bothered, hasn’t woken up yet, cheers David

Eve Roper August 2, 2022 at 7:19 PM Hahaha,,, cutie. Congratulations on your win, David. David Kavanagh August 3, 2022 at 1:25 AM Thank you so much Eve, we all need a niche to chill, but I guess the sloth beat us all to it, cheers David

Valsa George July 31, 2022 at 5:02 AM Ha... ha ! How cool and what an easy life, but how long is a question to be answered ! David Kavanagh July 31, 2022 at 5:20 AM As long as it takes Valsa, and the sloth probably couldn’t care less either, Lol, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Panagiota Romios July 29, 2022 at 1:06 PM Plain hilarious! Panagiota xxx David Kavanagh July 29, 2022 at 1:37 PM Thank you Pangie, adrenaline is great, but stress is certainly not a good buzz, cheers David

Harry Horsman July 17, 2022 at 5:48 AM No stress, maybe they know, more than the human race. Like this, David, goes deeper than first thought...Harry David Kavanagh July 17, 2022 at 6:57 AM Thanks Harry, I indeed intended it to be lighthearted with a little depth and perhaps a message to us headless chickens, cheers David

Susan Woodrow July 12, 2022 at 7:21 PM Lol! Good one :) David Kavanagh July 13, 2022 at 12:28 AM Thank you Susan, a little fun one, who’d condemn a sloth in the wild, lol, cheers David

Tom Cunningham July 12, 2022 at 10:53 AM Haha, we're all guiltily of it David, Sloths have it sussed. Tom David Kavanagh July 12, 2022 at 10:59 AM Indeed they have Tom, alongside Koalas and the grass growing lol, cheers David

L Milton Hankins July 12, 2022 at 8:25 AM Sounds like someone I know...me! David Kavanagh July 12, 2022 at 8:51 AM Get in line Milton, we’re all a little guilty of grabbing Zzzzs lol, cheers David

Linda Alice Fowler July 12, 2022 at 6:13 AM Great David...and just perfect. :)) Linda David Kavanagh July 12, 2022 at 7:17 AM Thank you Linda, who’d be a sloth with such an attitude! Me lol, cheers David