Summertime - the Japanese Hotan Style

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~Summertime~ (Hotan) It's summertime again Folks are so happy is here Spring is really gone now Weathers hot Some people enjoy Others not Temperature soar Time to have some fun outdoors Or relax inside. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 May.18.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Hotan", is a Japanese form, being a combination of a Haiku (hokku = ho) and a Tanka (tan).

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/19/2016 7:44:00 AM

- Time to enjoy ....... time to relax .... a lovely summer poems, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2016 5:30:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it my dear friend:))Sending you my love and prayers.Take good care now.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D