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Zephyrus, the god of the wind from the west Gently blows where the lily grows He is springtime's welcome guest In early summer he whispers to the rose As she sways in his warm caress He gently blows where the lily grows The winds of *Notus may give her stress For he brings the summer storms But she'll sway in Zephyrus's warm caress The winds of *Boreas are never warm He brings the cold winds of winter While Notus brings the summer storms Icicles on window sills begin to splinter As the winds of Boreas make us shiver He brings the cold winds of winter His icy breath is upon the river With gusts that never seem to rest The winds of Boreas make us shiver But Zephyrus is springtime's welcome guest ---- 12/11/2014 ''Z'' Contest, New Or Old - Poetry Contest Constance La France *Notus - The Greek god of the south wind *Boreas - The Greek god of the North wind and the bringer of winter ----

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Date: 12/11/2021 2:54:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your Second Place win in my "Z" Contest, lots of great imagery in your poem ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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Date: 12/12/2021 4:33:00 AM
Thank you for my placement Constance
Date: 12/2/2017 3:38:00 PM
Has a song like quality. :)
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Date: 11/21/2017 11:05:00 PM
This is magnificent Joseph! You excel at writing about nature my friend! Congratulations on the celebration of your poetry! : )
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Date: 1/4/2015 2:05:00 PM
I see congratulations are in order here and no wonder....lovely poem Joseph...
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:04:00 PM
Well researched n written Joseph! Congrats on top place win !
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:30:00 AM
Interesting write on the mythological wind god, congrats on the win, Joseph
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:22:00 AM
Congrats on you first place win!
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:40:00 PM
Joseph, Congrats on your win... Linda :
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:12:00 PM
Excellent poem, and the form has been very well tackled. Congrats on a great win! // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:58:00 PM
many congrats Joseph always a delight xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:49:00 PM
Congrats to you Joseph!
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:59:00 AM
Congrats on wind Joseph. Love-rajat
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:57:00 AM
so beautifully crafted with vivid description many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:00:00 AM
I do love the personalization you have given the Wind-Gods. You made this poem a beauty !
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:43:00 AM
Wow I am so sorry Joseph. I was sure you were on my list of favorite poets. I just added you.
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:40:00 AM
Excellent write Joseph, adding your Terzanelle to my favorites!
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Date: 1/2/2015 6:00:00 AM
Congrats on the high win and happy new year, Joseph
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Date: 1/2/2015 4:19:00 AM
Another pointer to your excellence,congrats on the win Joseph...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:02:00 AM
congrats Joseph good research, great form used, excellent pen. a worthy 1st congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:55:00 AM
Joseph, this is SUPERB! If is it is not at the top of the winner's list I will be so disappointed. Applause!!! I must fav this one!
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Date: 12/11/2014 11:01:00 PM
wow it looks like you really took this theme to a high level. Using the form of terzanelle for one thing. that is very ambitious and you did a great job with it. Love how you got both kinds of wind into the poem!
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Date: 12/11/2014 1:18:00 PM
I like it...a good poem! :) john. P.s i did not know beforehand of these Gods; we are always learning.
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