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Summers In the Usa

Summers in the USA Month one has begun Give a shout; school is out. Family vacation time; everything is sublime. Birds and bees greet glorious trees. Fireflies bright decorate night - June delight. Month two parades ensue. Independence Day is time for play. In night’s sky see fireworks fly. Even more- picnics galore July Four. Month three days flee Go to beaches; eat some peaches Back to school, the teachers rule! August through September too Summer – Adieu! Jan. 7, 2021 for Joseph May's Trinet Poetry Contest

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/21/2021 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations dear Andrea, a lovely win and beautiful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2021 3:36:00 AM

Andrea, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your third place win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2021 6:08:00 PM

sounds idyllic Andrea... maybe next year eh? many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/19/2021 6:48:00 AM

Wonderful write Andre, Congrats on your win

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/12/2021 9:30:00 AM

Fascinating.... Pangie

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/9/2021 7:52:00 AM

WoW! Andrea This is a splendid string of Trinet’s for the contest. I really like the Summer season and you why I love it so much. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/8/2021 10:30:00 AM

Nothing quite as satisfying as a woman with experience! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/8/2021 7:01:00 AM

I understood about summers in your country by reading this wonderful write Andrea. Also learnt how to write a Trinet. And yes, as many said below, you are a great source of inspiration for many to learn the various forms and aspects of good poetry. I too will try to write this form. Thank you for this lovely poem... Love n hugs ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/8/2021 5:47:00 AM

Beautiful images of summer, Andrea.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2021 4:32:00 AM

I remember those days but it has been a long time since I was there so I guess it is good that I still remember. I am pleased that you stopped by my page. Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/8/2021 3:21:00 AM

This is exceptional, a lovely thoughtful praise of the season... summer delights and insights, whispers of light... God bless you sweet friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/8/2021 1:52:00 AM

You love summer to distraction with this beautiful poem showing the most important events of summer. Let's hope next summer will be like this. ~~

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/7/2021 9:25:00 PM

A Summer of glee, and how it should always be. Love the positive theme here Andrea....

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/7/2021 8:07:00 PM

Wonderful write, Andrea... So beautifully penned verses of summer... I learned a new form from you today ... You are an inspiration... Thank you so much for sharing...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/7/2021 8:02:00 PM

Fantastic Trinet. I always like it when you go first so I can figure out what a Trinet is. You are my teacher, Andrea and I appreciate you!

Mike Bayles

Date: 1/7/2021 7:22:00 PM

Andrea, I really like the form and the rhymes. The imagery is great. I especially like the line: Family vacation time; everything is sublime.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/7/2021 4:48:00 PM

Here you have gathered all the delight of a true Summer! Let’s hope this year brings back cheer!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/7/2021 4:37:00 PM

You discribed your summers well Andrea, lets hope this summer everyone can enjoy them like we used too but I fear we won't. Tom