Summer's Guests

Oh! How I dreaded for the bee to come
But he came this summer with all his kin
He has invaded the peas, beans, and corn
They have turned the garden into their  den

I have not seen  the Purple Martin yet
Coming to swoop and dive at early eve
Surely we have enough bugs to feed him
And his family this I do perceive

Why has he stayed away_not come today
Did he loose way coming from winter's stay
Or is the housing here too old, too small
To accomodate growing family

Maybe too humid for him since trees
Have been removed__trees that carried breeze
Lifting him high on air currents to swoop
Early in the morn and early dusk's eve








(Needs work..Yet; Came to me after reading Emily
Dickinson)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Very nicely penned, Sara. Dickinson is a great source of inspiration and I see a bit of her memorable style in your poem. Love, Carolyn
Anderson Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Thanks for the comments on my Haiku, Sara. Always appreciated. JA
Sweetheart Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Emily is inspiring Sara as your lovely words are to me today.. we have not seen any bees here.very unusual for this time of year ..and not many birds like before.. and trees have been removed from lightening storms of the past so guess God's creatures have relocated.. with luv..hope u are feeling well today..
Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 12:01 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
Culverhouse Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:18 AM
Those martin's almost flew in the door, two were chasing each other.
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July 12, 2010 at 10:15 AM
enjoyed...I just made a wonderful meal...Peach, tender green beans out of my garden, baby squash, lemon, carrot and lobster sauteed with spices...oh yummy!! I saw the martin...I think it looks like the chimney sweep right?
Knop Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Nicely written, Sara! Enjoyed reading it today! Thank you for taking your time to read my poetry and for your kind comments!..Have a great week...Gert
Richards Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Great work Sara.. My summer bees (visiting me) are here right now....two of my grandchildren spending the week. The house is buzzing!! :)
A   Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 5:07 AM
well done Sara, enjoyed your poem,,check on it later to see how it turns out,..p.d.
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