Summer's Fickled Weather

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Breezes Trees gently stir Cloud designs form unmoved Accummulation quickens Whirlwind

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/9/2015 3:00:00 PM

It is that time of year, around here; well done.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/9/2015 1:26:00 PM

I've been watching the wild weather you guys are having over there this year its really tragic so many lives lost, we've had similar tragedies quite recently, you've really given a telling snippet of what's to come I felt like this could have been the start of a series this being the first, I haven't bèen well and I'm still not good but i felt a bit better this early morning so I came to read a few old favourites and new till sleep grabs me lovely to read you again love Jayne xox

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2015 12:27:00 PM

warming my senses with your nature's undulating flair , sara... really wonderful-- a traditional cinquain?.. huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2015 11:56:00 AM

wow the image and imagery are so beautiful! Hugs jan xx 7 xx