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Summer sweat

. Slid From hern the silk unto hern step out their lock Slid From mine the leather the cotton unto mine step out their heavy Sliding in the dim 'pon mine King her bulging eyne my precious Queen

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2024 10:49:00 AM

Could you do translations of your old English. With your poetry? That would be so cool

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/7/2024 11:07:00 PM

well, I sure understood your reply. It's clear as crystal, my friend.

James Peranteau
Date: 1/7/2024 6:36:00 PM

My Milkmaid...Perfect Rhythm...These Lips Would Splutter...Thoughts...Twisted Thoughts.......................(((Thrust Within Mine Charge< please read your comments to me within these two writes>Truculent Knave))) ..............................Is i in poetry}sum uv these writes i've written in 15years being on the Soup, if you read them, you'll notice that i've waned not from my style uv write, merely there are times that i get lost and spend more than usual on one style than the other. Regard your query here, enjoy this 3word write>I Can Not Stop ;) Thanks for sharing Andrea