Summer Solstice

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Shimmering in the heat of the sun Time stretched golden landscapes Summer solstice, sunrise to sunset Yellow orb sinking in fluorescent sea

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/27/2018 9:16:00 PM

Michael, an enchanting write expressed with beautiful imagery, especially your last line. Awesome alliteration 'Summer solstice, sunrise to sunset'.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/5/2017 8:24:00 PM

Hello Michael, you have described summer very well. The sunrise is beautiful just like the sunset. Have a nice evening my friend.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/25/2017 11:54:00 AM

Beautiful. Well done, Michael.

Melissa Tracy

Date: 11/22/2017 9:16:00 AM

Beautiful!

Gracie Woodsinger

Date: 11/20/2017 5:55:00 PM

I can see why this is among your best poems. It captures a moment of time with just a few well-written lines.

Old Buck

Date: 11/19/2017 1:58:00 PM

Your words paint a picture many have tried to capture with a lens and couldn't. Thanks for sharing these scenes with us. oldbuck

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 11/19/2017 1:57:00 PM

Beautiful! I was there for a moment. This one goes into my treasure box.