Sara Ella Poet Free verse

Summer Snow Angels - Collaboration With Darren White

Spring rain, and I am flat on the lawn:
arms spread, laughing loud.
I create snow angels without snow,
daisies watch with undisguised surprise.

Like the day, I dream in wild red of
strawberries bursting on my tongue;
petal feathers, pure radiance:
sun in sprinklers reflected prismatic rainbow

rain shower painting chromatic arrays
sing the summer colors
painted winter's grey goodbye
fly to the heavens on sunshine rays

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Eileen Manassian June 2, 2017 at 11:13 AM Lovely...full of joy and light. Great collab, you tw. Sara Ella June 2, 2017 at 11:23 AM Thank you Eileen :) Darren is the expert and we had fun creating this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2017 at 6:21 AM - Beautiful from both of you, Sara & Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Ella June 2, 2017 at 6:38 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :) We had fun writing it! Hugs back <3

Arthur Vaso May 26, 2017 at 10:44 PM Haven't been around as much but what a joy to read this lovely poem! Great collab you guys!! Darren White May 27, 2017 at 9:35 AM Thanks Art :) We loved writing this. Sara Ella May 27, 2017 at 6:45 AM Thank you Arthur :)

Tim Smith May 26, 2017 at 11:09 AM Wow guys awesome....a fave Darren White May 27, 2017 at 9:35 AM Weeee, fav, thanks my friend :) Sara Ella May 26, 2017 at 1:45 PM Thank you Tim :) YOU are awesome, my friend :D

Chris Green May 26, 2017 at 6:29 AM This is beautiful, a true feel good poem from two wonderful poets. I love the scene you have created here and I can see it clearly. This was really fun to read and imagine. Great job Sara and Darren. This is something to be proud of. Darren White May 27, 2017 at 9:34 AM And we are, it was lovely to write together :) Sara Ella May 26, 2017 at 1:38 PM Thank you Chris :) I am so glad that you enjoyed our poem :D

White Wolf May 26, 2017 at 3:29 AM This is beautiful! Well done guys! Darren White May 27, 2017 at 9:33 AM Heya Budge, thanks mate! Sara Ella May 26, 2017 at 5:06 AM Thank you Budgie :)

Jan Allison May 26, 2017 at 3:28 AM oh wow what a fun poem love the imagery of the snow angels without the snow but don't think I will practice in the rain - a real feel good poem Sara and Darren:-) hugs Jan xx Darren White May 27, 2017 at 9:32 AM Pfft Jan, spoilsport ;) Sara Ella May 26, 2017 at 5:17 AM Thank you Jan :) I am thinking that snow angels would be more fun to make on a sunny day too!

Darren White May 26, 2017 at 1:20 AM Loved writing this with you my friend, we created a happy poem together <3 :) Sara Ella May 26, 2017 at 1:25 AM This was fun! :D Thank you <3