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Summer Senryu

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she applies sunscreen to his sun kissed body summer loving! Modern senryu Contest Summer Lovin Sponsor Andrea Dietrich 05~16~16

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/21/2016 11:12:00 PM

A cracker Jan ! Congrats too.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Lenny:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/21/2016 3:21:00 PM

Excellent Senryu, Jan. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2016 12:08:00 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Palli

Date: 5/21/2016 12:20:00 AM

Cute one! Congrats, JAN.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/20/2016 8:59:00 PM

I loved your entry Jan! How did you find such a perfect picture to go with your poem? Awesome! Congratulations on your great win. I am happy to be in your company! #7 ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:24:00 PM

I write the poem and then try and find a suitable image:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2016 7:20:00 PM

This was so darling, Jan, and I loved how you kept to my theme of summer lovin' with it Congrats on a great win in my contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:24:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea it was a lovely challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2016 1:21:00 PM

I like this senryu, Jan; I'll call it double helping of love:) Winning material...Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:25:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul I am so glad Andrea liked it:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 5/21/2016 9:21:00 AM

Am running straight back with congratulations, Jan:) Well done! Hugs // paul

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 5/19/2016 10:24:00 AM

Sweet love,thanks Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:49:00 PM

Thank Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/17/2016 11:17:00 PM

Awww very sweet, Jan. And clever too with the play on words ... Andrea will have difficulty judging this contest, methinks.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2016 5:11:00 PM

I hope Andrea likes it Timothy:-) hugs Jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/17/2016 10:50:00 AM

What a fabulous poem Jan! I loved reading it this morning! You still have such talent that I desire to read all your stuff! I'll have to catch up on what all I missed someday! I graduated from college with my poetry degree and am now going for my masters in the same! It has been quite a road getting here! The graduate program is much harder than the undergraduate, and it's been tough! But it's worth it! I'll stop by again sometime in the future!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2016 5:10:00 PM

OH WOW many congratulations Russell that is a fabulous achievement:-):-) Good luck with the masters I am so so delighted for you:-) hugs Jan xx