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Summer Rain

Fast the clouds gathered and got too much charged Profuse moistures had by that time come close Pink passion inside the clouds well enlarged Two such blocks merged in fusion and arose In scarlet joy warmth and pressure discharged In flash dance each other they did enclose Bringing out lightning and boom shaking earth Making the rains bloom in a fruitful mirth September 3, 2017

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Date: 9/5/2017 8:38:00 AM
I sense a metaphor of passion in this provocative piece Probir. This is beautiful! ; )
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Date: 9/4/2017 9:50:00 PM
A beautiful write Probir. Lovely poetic expression and imagery. I truly enjoyed reading your poem this evening :)
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Date: 9/4/2017 8:23:00 PM
enjoyed the nice piece Probir. Wish you best for contest.
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Date: 9/3/2017 3:33:00 PM
Well written Probir--good luck for the contest!
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Date: 9/3/2017 1:33:00 PM
- Sounds like a needy rain ... beautiful, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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