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Summer Rain

Summer rains hard upon window's fogged glass Thunder rumbles across the darkest sky The lightning cracks leaves a luminous flash And winds have blown as clouds begin to cry To wet the open door from her goodbye Alone with an empty and windswept doom The storms inside and out now multiply Both take a toll on the life they consume One will pass the other will leave a tear-soaked room 6/28/18 contest Summer rain storm (2)

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Date: 7/19/2019 11:06:00 PM
Stunningly haunting and beautiful. The comparison was so striking. Love this one. Lonna
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Date: 7/7/2018 2:20:00 PM
Well written Frederic. ! :)
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:16:00 PM
A beautiful blend of nature and sadness ablest of luck, Frederick!
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:16:00 PM
A beautiful blend of nature and sadness ablest of luck, Frederick!
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Date: 7/5/2018 3:00:00 PM
frederic, lovely blend of nature and human condition... such a fine write i must say!.. huggs
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Date: 7/1/2018 2:45:00 PM
VEry creative take on the topic, Frederic. I like how it involves human emotion as well as the elements!
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Date: 6/28/2018 4:34:00 PM
Most profound lines
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Date: 6/28/2018 4:22:00 PM
Hi Frederic.. Love this break up poem and I adore this line, "To wet the open door from her goodbye". I got such a powerful mental picture!!
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