Summer Night

The night will wait, until we come again
Heaven must know, we need assurance that
Our tomorrow is waiting in the wings
For love such as this,.. is never ending

You must not fear the coming of the moon
The night will wait, until we come again
Evening comes streaming with fading color
A summer day bids us farewell, knowing..

Our tomorrow is waiting in the wings
Lonely be the dark of a thousand eyes
Even the rolling hills will miss our love
The night will wait, until we come again

If fate comes as a comet in the night
Or comes as eclipse of the moon,...do not fear...
Our tomorrow is waiting in the wings
Though summer has gone, as summers must go...

We will climb stairs to summer once again
And I will be yours 'till the end of time
The night will wait, until we come again
Our tomorrow is waiting in the wings...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/9/2010 11:52:00 AM
Wow- you really put forth aesthetic quality in your work. Incredible, once again.
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Date: 6/9/2010 9:12:00 AM
Beauty and love with hopes flashes every where in this beautiful write my friend. The last four lines are heart touching and reveals great love and devotion. Love and best wishes..........Ravindra .... Carrie Richards.
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:57:00 AM
This is just so beautiful Carrie and I am adding it to my favorites. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 3:23:00 AM
Marvellous write, Carrie...Especially the last stanza! Enjoyed reading it today and thank you for your always kind comments...:) Gert
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:45:00 PM
Eloquent expression of love and the promise it holds for our tomorrows, Carrie. Awesome poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:37:00 PM
Beautiful romantic work Carrie. It moves in a smooth round motion. well done...Margaret
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:56:00 PM
Beautiful Poem, Carrie, and I agree with Dr. Mehta. Love, Lainie
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:10:00 PM
very beautiful write!! enjoyed!
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:03:00 PM
You could have turned this poem into a NICE VILLANELLE
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:00:00 PM
Nice positive hopes of the love. Good luck
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:53:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL WRITE -IRMA
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:03:00 PM
Oh Carrie, this is so sweet and tender..just lovely work. I love this form and was not at all familiar with it..but i had such fun writing mine. I smell another win for you..BG
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:59:00 PM
Great write that you have penned in this one which should be in the winners' circle...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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