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When we went down the road that day, Into the green and sun, just we' It was a time of joy and play When we went down the road! - that day So sad, I go alone today To hear the birds and see the trees When we - went down the road that day Into the green and sun, just we! _____________________ May 24, 2015 Poetry/Triolet/Summer Memory Copyright Protected, ID 05-676-662-24 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, One Lovely Summer Triolet, sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 2015 Third Place

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Date: 6/14/2015 7:50:00 AM
A lovely and nostalgic peep down memory lane, Constance...congratulations on your podium finish...very merited! hugs // paul
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:38:00 PM
A beautiful nostalgic write, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:23:00 PM
So lovely, Broken! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:24:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)
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Date: 6/13/2015 7:25:00 AM
this poem just opened up some doors that I don't often peek through at a few moments in time.....best not forgotten. Thanks for this wonderful memory provoking invite. OH>>>and congrats on a well earned placement.
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Date: 6/13/2015 5:32:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/13/2015 12:46:00 AM
Constance,I just adored the theme of this one. You know me well, and how I am about nostalgic poems. Is it just me, or have you become QUITE remarkable with meter!!! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 6/13/2015 12:33:00 AM
BW, This is beautiful. Congrats on your win:) Alexis
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Date: 5/25/2015 9:06:00 AM
the flow is really nice... :) the shifts of emotions and scenes witty!... :)!! 7 for me.. :)!~olive eloisa
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:21:00 AM
We all have one of those memories. Beautifully expressed.
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:00:00 PM
very lovely Connie gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:27:00 PM
the memories will always be with us Broken Wings - good luck in the contest - I've not even had chance to look at the contest yet! Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:45:00 AM
Well, not sure I got the iambic tetrameter right, not sure I got the punctuation right, but I know I got the sadness right, Mom and me liked to take summer drives in the country anytime I was off work, we loved nature! And I miss those drives so much . . .
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