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a breath of sunshine intoxicating beauty - wet asphalt smells good 23.05.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart 1st place in the contest

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Date: 7/26/2019 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 7/26/2019 8:39:00 AM
- Kim, thank you for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/30/2019 4:12:00 PM
Excellent Haiku! Well done.
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Date: 6/2/2019 1:19:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/27/2019 9:43:00 PM
Beautiful image painted by your pen, Sunshine, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/28/2019 1:59:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/27/2019 9:25:00 AM
Anne-Lise congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!
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Date: 5/28/2019 2:00:00 PM
- Many thanks for my placement on your winning list ... a pleasure to attend D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2019 11:36:00 PM
Still here but funny thing , It's raining today, still warm though.. Congratulations Tom.
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Date: 5/27/2019 4:22:00 AM
- The sun will come back soon, Tom :) - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2019 7:04:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Anne
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Date: 5/27/2019 4:20:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2019 3:32:00 PM
Back again, Anne-Lise:) Congratulations on your high-flying win!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/27/2019 4:20:00 AM
- Many thanks Paul, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2019 3:23:00 PM
Congrats, Anne-Lise. That wet asphalt smell IS great. Such a nice touch! :) gw
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Date: 5/27/2019 4:19:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/26/2019 1:46:00 PM
Many congrats Anne-Lise for your top win in the contest and your beautiful Haiku - lovely... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 5/27/2019 4:19:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/24/2019 9:07:00 AM
Very appealing to the senses, Anne-Lise. A breath of sunshine delivered by a Sunshine Smile :) Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/24/2019 3:39:00 PM
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Date: 5/24/2019 7:40:00 AM
I can smell the wet asphalt. Nicely done . Great photo as well.
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Date: 5/24/2019 3:39:00 PM
- Thank you Allen, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/24/2019 6:48:00 AM
Oh, I agree - it does smell good. I relate to this and I really like it! Your haiku touched many of my senses. All the best to you ... CayCay
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Date: 5/24/2019 3:38:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comment, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/24/2019 6:42:00 AM
This brings a smile. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 5/24/2019 3:38:00 PM
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Date: 5/24/2019 6:10:00 AM
This haiku warms up the senses! GL in contest! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 5/24/2019 3:38:00 PM
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Date: 5/23/2019 7:46:00 PM
I remember those days when I felt like a vibrant flower in the rain, lol, older but still in love with it. Thanks for sharing.xo
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:03:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/23/2019 2:40:00 PM
wonderful pic to accompany your poem Anne-Lise I prefer the smell of wet soil to asphalt:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:03:00 AM
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Date: 5/23/2019 1:12:00 PM
Adorable...so playful and delightful in its simplicity;-)
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:02:00 AM
- Thank you Keith, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/23/2019 1:05:00 PM
Wonderful. Great write to pic, Well done. so clever. pete.
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:02:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/23/2019 11:53:00 AM
so refreshing, anne... good one!...happy huggs
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:01:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment, Nette :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/23/2019 7:51:00 AM
Love the first line Anne...Wonderful write..
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:01:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/23/2019 7:23:00 AM
The beauty in your photo..I read in your words Anne-Lise..so well captured..succinct!
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:00:00 AM
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Date: 5/22/2019 8:36:00 PM
Wet asphalt smells good— funny I remember it now that you’ve said it! The picture works so well with your haiku :)
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:00:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment, P.S. :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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