John Hamilton Poet Sonnet

Summer Love

Summer love  (sonnet contest sample)


Winter blues, gloom, fades as spring advances
We're crazy in love on hot hazy days
Summer love blooms with whispers and glances
Caught in love's embrace as the willow sways

Ensnared by love's frenetic energy
Heart strings strumming to a Calypso beat
We move with syncopated synergy
passions swells rising from two lips in heat

Diamond tipped waves shimmer, sending shivers
Steamy heat rises on the cool blue lake
Oil rubbed skin glistens, trembles and quivers
Our senses come alive in passions wake

Tethered together in honey'd repose
As heat exchanges we superimpose



May 6,2018

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Chuck Melugin May 31, 2018 at 6:16 PM Way to go John!! Very, very good writing!! John Hamilton June 3, 2018 at 2:51 PM Thanks Chuck

Anisha Dutta May 14, 2018 at 12:03 PM Got an idea. Now trying in my own way. John Hamilton June 3, 2018 at 2:51 PM Thanks Anisha

Susan Ashley May 12, 2018 at 11:38 AM Oh John, your sensual and luscious sonnet is sweet and hot just as summer love should be.. your beautiful imagery speaks to the ecstasy of passionate love in bloom. A thrilling and stirring template for your contest! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Susan Ashley May 12, 2018 at 3:32 PM Thank you for your vote of confidence. We’ll see if I can conjure something up :)) John Hamilton May 12, 2018 at 3:11 PM Thanks Susan, looking forward to your entry, you will do amazing I know!

Winged Warrior May 12, 2018 at 8:51 AM Double talented...lyrics and sonnets... a great sonnet example John...love and light...^WW^ John Hamilton May 12, 2018 at 10:24 AM Thanks WW, looking forward to your entry!! Thanks for the fly by!!

Pandita Sietesantos May 10, 2018 at 3:27 PM This is such a lovely piece that I know will do very well in the contest! A Sonnet beautifully penned and brushed with picturesque imagery! Hugs. Pandita John Hamilton May 11, 2018 at 9:27 AM Thanks Pandita for the nice comments, it's a sample for my contest!

Eve Roper May 7, 2018 at 9:22 PM Lovely write, John, :) hugs John Hamilton May 8, 2018 at 9:14 AM Thanks Eve, looking forward to your entry!

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2018 at 5:34 PM a great model for us, John. It really conveys the warmth of summer love. and its sweetness (honey'd repose!) John Hamilton May 7, 2018 at 7:29 PM Thanks Andrea, looking forward to your entry!

Janis Medders Tobechi May 6, 2018 at 10:22 PM Wonderful write that will be hard to top. Love the luscious lines. John Hamilton May 7, 2018 at 8:22 AM Thanks Janice, I'm sure you can do better, looking forward to your entry.

Jan Allison May 6, 2018 at 2:26 PM lovely and romantic sonnet John:-) hugs jan xx John Hamilton May 7, 2018 at 8:19 AM Thanks Jan, I look forward to your entry!

Heidi Sands May 6, 2018 at 2:08 PM Oh this is sweet John. Nice :) John Hamilton May 7, 2018 at 8:18 AM Thanks Heidi I look forward to your entry!