Summer Kids

Kids, alolescence, fun, sun how beautiful, and how it reminds me of my youth. Funny how we don't keep in touch with primary school friends but we do when we go to high school , a lovely poem Michelle. Hugs and blessings.JENNIFER.

A awesome pen,,,I could see kids doing just that. And reminding me of my own adolescence., thanks. Huggs Pangie

I enjoyed your "summer kids" write. Oh yes, kids and the long hot summer days. I hated it. Enjoy your day writing away............

Aah, the long hot summers of childhood / youthdom. A time when people made their own entertainment and searched for themselves and were taught HOW to think - before social media told us WHAT to think Your poem drips with the warm glow of nostalgia and reminds me of playing cowboys as a child :) P.S. I actually know what a Schwinn is thanks to an episode of American Pickers that was shown here in the UK a few weeks back. :) Lovely poem Michelle. Cheers - Gary

Yes Michelle, Maureen and other PS greats had a schwinn-ing time recalling their own herds and armies of youthful talents. Shalom shalom, Paz!

Michelle , Awesome ! Fun ! So reminiscent of teenage years. I love ~ herds of silver schwinns . I can see them now ! Susan :)

You blow me away lady. Love this. And herds of silver schwins my heart! A fave. xomo

Excellent imagery, Michael. Brings back some fun times to my mind. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

WoW! Michelle, You painted a lovely picture with words. I enjoyed the “ carefree” tone and vibe of your well written write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Love the imagery, Michelle! A Fine 'Silver Sonnet!' Peace, Gershon

A very unique poem that is perfectly composed, gl in the contest dear heart :)

Your work exudes a sense of deep contemplation and reflection, evoking feelings of beauty, dreaminess, and nostalgia. The ending and final stanza in particular resonated with me. Best of luck in the contest.

Beautiful, dreamy and nostalgic. I especially like the ending. Good luck in the contest. :)

I especially love the opening stanza Michelle such vivid description especially the sprouting legs. excellent ink as ever Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Take me back to those high school days, with my long hair flying in the wind, our bike lights lit up huge tress and nights were safe. A creative write, appreciated. Hugs, Pangie