Summer Heat

In trance of night, my summer catches fire.
An inner spark explodes into a blaze. 
We, two, collide as one star of desire,
Then douse our skin in waves of passion’s glaze.

Your silhouette caught midst my tongue and lips
tastes like the salted swells of summer seas.
Then, you un-shade your heart and fingertips
as we align our glow in whispered pleas.

You touch me once, and I flow into you,
like ocean waters roll to meet the sands.
Of lips, of breath, and soul, your warmth feels new,
My orb alight, yields in your willing hands.

Our summer heat will thaw the frosty fall.
Without your touch, I may not live at all.


Written for 5/31/20 John Hamilton's
Summer Heat Sonnet Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/14/2020 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserving First Place win Rhonda! I am happy John recognised its merit too. xxoo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:07:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. I appreciate your support! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/13/2020 6:12:00 PM
This is really a passionate flow of emotions from your pen Rhonda. Congratulations on your win. Much love and blessings :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:06:00 PM
Thanks, Aditi! Much love returned, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/13/2020 11:01:00 AM
What a masterful write Rhonda, a score of 39 out of 40, gives you a worthy shared top win, congrats!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:05:00 PM
Thank you, John! You inspired me with a contest that took out of my comfort zone which was fun, and I am honored for the top placement. Rhonda xx
Date: 6/4/2020 11:33:00 PM
Rhonda, excellent sonnet of summer passion and romance. Takes me back to a summer long ago, and memories of first love's glow. Enjoyed this very much, best wishes in the contest ~ John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/5/2020 1:31:00 PM
Thanks, John! I'm happy I could bring back good memories for you. xx Rhonda
Date: 6/3/2020 6:15:00 PM
Robert took the words right out of my mouth Rhonda. This is simply Fantastic! It is sensuous and tasteful without being crude or being too graphic. Beautifully written! Bravo! xxoo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/5/2020 1:30:00 PM
Thanks, Connie. I'm glad you think it's tasteful. I was hoping I didnt cross the line. :) xx Rhonda
Date: 6/2/2020 8:53:00 PM
Fantastic sonnet! I do so love sonnets and this is another awesome one to have read and so enjoyed. Closing two verses are indeed very sweet icing on the cake too. A fav.. God bless...
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/2/2020 9:16:00 PM
Thank you for all your visits tonight, my friend, and for the faves! I'm honored...blessings, Rhonda
Date: 6/2/2020 8:58:00 AM
Past sensuous, entering the erotic. An enticing, well crafted poem.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/2/2020 8:50:00 PM
Thanks, Lawrence. This one was definitely out of my comfort zone. I hope John doesn't think it crossed the line for his contest. xx Rhonda
Date: 6/1/2020 5:33:00 PM
It's sounds HOT...The weather's not easy to take, from one extreme to the other...but we need it now to get over this virus...All the best
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/1/2020 11:56:00 PM
Thanks for your comments, Arturo! xx Rhonda
Date: 6/1/2020 2:25:00 PM
The last line is certainly a winner! It is truly amazing what touch - and the anticipation of touch - can do! Aloha! Rico
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/1/2020 11:55:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, Rico...so true!
Date: 6/1/2020 10:21:00 AM
Sounds like your summer is sizzling, Rhonda. "Your silhouette caught midst my tongue and lips" on my, I'm blushing too. I enjoyed reading your steamy sonnet, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/1/2020 11:51:00 PM
I'd have to send my kids to summer camp to have a sizzling summer like this, John...lol. It was fun to write, anyway, got me out of my comfort zone. xx Rhonda
Date: 6/1/2020 8:52:00 AM
WoW! Now that is what I call Summer Heat! Sincerely~ Elaine
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/1/2020 11:44:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine. Passion is not my favorite to write about, but I'm trying to get out of my comfort zone once in awhile. xx Rhonda
Date: 5/31/2020 9:26:00 PM
Rhonda, I so enjoyed this sensuous Sonnet. What better way to describe the sizzling season two lovers create. -Richard
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/31/2020 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. This is the most 'passionate' poem I think I've ever written. I'm making myself blush, lol! xx Rhonda
Date: 5/31/2020 4:59:00 PM
You are really good at writing sonnet..this one blends nicely summer's heat and inner spark of emotions. All the best, Rhonda.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/31/2020 7:27:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay! I enjoy writing sonnets...hugs, Rhonda
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