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Summer Has Never Been So Cold

our passion was like blazing embers ignited by love's kindle- now I sit by the ivory sill encompassed in burnt ashes. summer has never been so cold.... since my love began to unfold. our sunset used to be medallion and tangerine- western skies setting in an aria of a utopian romance. now I lay on an empty bed, encompassed in bloodstained ebon tears. summer has never been so cold… without your body to have and to hold. our enchanting fairy-tale used to be full of big orange pumpkins and blue glass slippers- now I stand by the tower window wishing I could be Cinderella once again. summer has never been so cold… with you removing your ring of gold. May 10, 2018

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Date: 5/12/2018 9:11:00 PM
Excellent, WINNING poem, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 5/11/2018 10:56:00 PM
I am loving your form. Most effective to deliver an awesome punch. Beautiful poem. Congrats on your most deserving win, Laura.
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Date: 5/11/2018 12:53:00 PM
I could truly feel the sadness in this poem, Luloo, all the best to you my friend. John
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Date: 5/10/2018 12:50:00 PM
OH, this is so sad and really reaches the reader deeply. Well written ! :)
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Date: 5/10/2018 10:48:00 AM
...and love lies bleeding as it dies. So sad, Laura. Happy Mother's Day!
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