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Summer Haiku

yellow globe in sky shining down its summer time roast human being comp entry 16052016

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/24/2016 5:28:00 PM

made me smile especially the final line - I try and keep out of the sun lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2016 12:00:00 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Stephen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/21/2016 4:36:00 PM

many thanks anne - lise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2016 7:59:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest, Stephen. I appreciate that you did not capitalize the beginning words in each line.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/16/2016 11:05:00 AM

I plan on using sun screen so I don't scorch

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/16/2016 6:42:00 AM

haha :-) nice.

Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/16/2016 7:41:00 AM

my work is done it got a haha thank you