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Summer Haiku

yellow globe in sky shining down its summer time roast human being comp entry 16052016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/24/2016 5:28:00 PM
made me smile especially the final line - I try and keep out of the sun lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:00:00 PM
- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Stephen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/21/2016 4:36:00 PM
many thanks anne - lise
Date: 5/20/2016 7:59:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest, Stephen. I appreciate that you did not capitalize the beginning words in each line.
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Date: 5/16/2016 11:05:00 AM
I plan on using sun screen so I don't scorch
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Date: 5/16/2016 6:42:00 AM
haha :-) nice.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/16/2016 7:41:00 AM
my work is done it got a haha thank you

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