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summer haiku

already summer leaves fall unnoticed whilst abundant ~ all ends have beginnings

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John Lawless

Date: 6/18/2025 4:28:00 PM

OH, a subtle twist and a bit of wordplay...and ....TA DA....the beginning of the end..nicely constructed DD, had me tripping over the subtle nuances.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/18/2025 9:53:00 PM

Nice to see you John :) I struggle to estol the virtues of a flower, so have to find another topic and play :) glad you liked this one - I enjoyed relaxed syllable rules too x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2025 2:01:00 PM

What a lovely Haiku write you have here. "Good Luck" if for a contest. No down leaves here just hot. Come on Fall... Have a lovely/blessed day writing away..........

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/18/2025 2:39:00 PM

Thank you Paula x hope you're still enjoying your special day :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2025 9:23:00 AM

I've noticed it already on my walks Dilly but it is probably down to the gale force winds and not mother nature. hugs Jan xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/18/2025 9:26:00 AM

Maybe so Jan, the woodland paths were pretty covered really but the trees themselves lush x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2025 8:29:00 AM

- "all ends have beginnings" ... so true :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/18/2025 8:49:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise - it's interesting how early falling leaves start :) thanks for your comment x