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Premiere Contest WinnerSummer Fun - the Beach Story


The seashore is a wondrous stage, for in the sun's delight,
I sit and watch a play unfold- it's there within my sight!

Those beauties, young with golden tans, demurely sashay by
In search of those admiring eyes that peep so deft and sly.

While young dudes with their virile forms and sun-bleached wavy hair,
Strut back and forth so confident with sort of haughty air.

Small children, filling up their pails, build castles made of sand,
While fathers take a break from rest to lend a helping hand.

And mothers being what they are- in their protective lots,
Are ever rubbing suntan cream on freckled, sunburned tots.

Those chunky mid-life guys and gals packed tight in swim attire
Add so much fullness to the scene, for those to see, admire!

And oldsters wrapped up tight and snug to shield from wind and sun,
With eyes shut under hats of straw, in dreamland have their fun!

At water's edge, the tame are found, waves rolling at their feet;
While further out, some brave the swells to make their fun complete.

And there, up high on pedestals, bronzed lifeguards oversee
With ever watchful, cautious eyes, the shore's activity.

And here I sit, a spectator, relaxed this summer day-
But, am I too a character to those who look my way?


April 20, 2015

Premiere Contest: My Favorite Vacation In Rhyme
Sponsor: L Milton Hankins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 5:32 PM
I enjoy people watching at the beach too. I remember taking my youngest daughter to the beach for the first time when she was a baby 12 mos. maybe. My husband was watching her and before he could stop her she grabbed a handful of sand and put it into her mouth. Not easy to get it out. Lol I enjoyed your poem a lot Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Hankins Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra, for your placement in my vacation contest. The competition was tight, believe me, but your beach adventure was extremely well-written and an enjoyable read. Good work!
Pett Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sandra with your beautifully written couplets, thoroughly enjoyed reading and imagining being there on the beach this summers day. :))
Haight Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Thank you very much, Roy, for your visit, congrats, and supportive comments! Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 4:07 PM
A charming poem, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win. Your descriptions are delightful and I love your last line.
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Thank you so much, Line. It was a fun write for me! Hugs, Sandra :)
Gentry Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Entertaining and imagery puts me right there on the beach. :)
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Thank you, Susan. I had fun writing this since we used to go to the beach each summer and I had much inspiration for the poem! Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Congrats on your win, Sandra, I see that you dusted off an oldie but goldie. I enjoyed reading it. John
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your congrats and uplifting comment. Sandra :)
Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:12 PM
Congrats!!! Sandra on your marvelous win...great write my friend...love & light...^WW^
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Thank you very much, WW, for your congrats and supportive comment. It was a fun write for me, and I am so glad you enjoyed it! Sandra :)
Cheema Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Congrats Sandra on your lovely win! A oliday mood!
Haight Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Thank you very much, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Dutta Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Congrats Sandra for the beautiful poem. love. Anisha D
Haight Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Thank you, Anisha. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Thank you again, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Sandra, very cute an clever!! Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so much, Laura. Actually wrote it while at the beach observing! Hugs, Sandra
Nance Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Your write made me smile, many thanks for that! :) hugs
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Thank you, Casarah! Enjoyed your contest and my nice placement. Hugs, Sanddra
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:01 PM
GOOD ONE..SKAT
Haight Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:04 PM
Thank you once again, Skat! Really appreciate your visits. Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 11:35 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your Humorous Poetry contest win :) LINDA
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 3:24 PM
;) Thank you, Linda! Hugs, Sandra
Das Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. Happy to see this is a winner.
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 4:09 PM
Thank you so much, Nandita! Hugs, Sandra
Lindley Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 9:36 PM
Congratulations on a great win my friend..
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 4:09 PM
Thanks, Robert, I appreciate your congrats! Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 5:57 PM
delightful and humourous - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 4:10 PM
Hi Jan, thanks so much. This was based on my many visits to the Jersey Shore over the years! Hugs, Sandra
Nunez Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 12:55 PM
A delightful read, Sandra. Congrats! :)
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 4:11 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Kim. I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Ebbs Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Very nice and congrats!
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 4:11 PM
Thank you, Ed. I appreciate your support. Sandra
May Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 11:08 PM
Congrats on your win Sandra
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Hi Joseph, thank you so much. I appreciate your stopping by with your congratulations. Sandra
Rv Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 9:05 PM
This is fantastic! I first thought it was for the vacations contest .. Love the ending too! All the best!! HOW so you write so perfecly??
Haight Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Thank you, Sneha! I am happy you enjoyed it. I appreciate your visit and very positive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Das Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:28 AM
You write so beautifully. How well you describe the characters. Beautiful poem with humour. #7
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Again, Nandita, I am thankful for your visits, encouraging comments, and great rating support. Thanks you so much. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Sandra, you have penned a delightful and fun day at the beach, people watching, oh some are so funny, well done 7 and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, Here Kitty, Kitty
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Happy you like it, BW. We go to the Jersey Shore each year to spend time with family, and I wrote this while there watching. Thank you once again for your continued visits and nice rating support! Hugs, Sandra
Ackerson Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Delightful and well written! Glad I settled on this one.
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Hi Mark, so nice of you to stop by with your positive comment! Much appreciated. Sandra
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