Summer Fun

Summer Fun
Summer was not much fun in the teenage years
In fact there was very little of it but lots of anxious tears
Then the summer disco started in the village hall
We couldn’t believe our luck we were gonna have a ball.

But who would come to a village disco not on a bus route
There were only about fifteen teenagers, and they were all related to boot.
Oh what joy, the army camp, sent in the boy cadets
We were all allowed to mix with them and this we did you can bet.

But there I was wallflower self- conscious feeling dull
Not asked to dance by any boy no one to give a thrill
Until the tallest most handsome boy, his smile lit up the room
Came and sat with me you should have watched me bloom.

He was the catch they all wanted, but none could catch his eye
Just me sat in the corner, and he never passed me by
At the end of each dance night, we walked home hand in hand
His kisses they were magical, I was in some promised land.

We only met once a week through the summer of seventy-two
What a summer it was full of fun and happiness and never blue
I often wonder about that boy who kissed so well at age thirteen
What a catch for some woman, and of his kisses I now just dream
© 09/09/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Summer Fun" contest GG. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 8:02 AM
Wow...this is one heck of a summer, gal! You sure told on yourself! hee hee hee! Congrats on putting your life in rhyme...this was a fun read! gwendolen
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September 15, 2012 at 11:17 PM
Hi Mandy, a wonderful congratulations with your awesome win in craig cornish's " Summer Fun " Xool contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
M V Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 5:15 AM
Beautifully penned on summer,Mandy.Congratulations on win!
Onclaud Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 11:18 AM
you make summer seem so eternally romantic... such fine write, mandy.. love it!...congrats on your fine win.. :) huggs
Alvez Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 9:33 AM
Mandy, congratulations on your win for this lovely verse...summer kisses, ah what could be better... Cynthia
Liwayway Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 9:25 AM
CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND MANDY ON WINNING YOUR LOVELY POEM...CHEERS!!!!
Gasun Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 8:05 AM
Ops!! I have enjoyed reading your poem, Mandy! It really deserved to win! Indeed a fun summer time especially from the 3rd stanza up to the last scene! MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN! thanks for sharing!!! hugs and luv, leonora
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 2:28 AM
Enchanting memories Mandy. Congratulations on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 8:42 PM
I think your idea of summer fun was the BEST. I would give anything to go back to that fun kissing at about same time period as you were in with this winning poem. congrats, mandy.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 6:31 AM
Bet we could have had some fun..xx
Johnson Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Exciting memories for that young girl. Congratulations Mandy. Love, Joyce
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 7:25 PM
Sweet memories of puppy love, Mandy! Congrats on your wonderful win...hugs, Rhonda
May Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 6:16 PM
congrats on your win Mandy....nicely done
Dietrich Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 6:58 PM
I had a summer love like this. Such wonderful memories they give us. You described it very well, mandy!!! (you and I very close in age I can see.)
Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 6:30 PM
LOl so sweet [second to last line ..about..typo hon] should do well a fine story! Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 11:47 PM
Thanks sweetie will do it now xx
Gorelick Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 5:19 PM
Sigh...young love..nothing like it...this is so sweet. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 5:12 PM
an awesome poem Mandy with a beautiful setting of young love and fun .. we all had some endings of similar scenes but oh those memories luv .. best wishes ..
May Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 10:50 AM
very nice poem Mandy......best wishes in the contest.....love...Joseph
Horne Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 9:07 AM
awww, lovely nostalgic write, my friend - I'd love to know what happened to my first love too
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 9:16 AM
well if you let spiders stay in she is well gone my friend xx
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September 9, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Ah yes... that summer of yours... those summers of yore... Wonderful poem... Terry
Horsman Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 7:35 AM
I'm envious of your Summer Fun, (wish i was there) but looking on the bright side, look what wonderful poetry it created. yes, what i'm trying to says is: love your poem
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