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Summer Field

daisy stacked meadow poised white finery of June sunlight's cheeky leap Haiku written: June 29, 2021 For: Summer Haiku contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2021 3:45:00 AM

"cheeky leap" made me smile.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/17/2021 1:51:00 PM

Hi Caren, your thoughtful visits to my small submissions bring me smiles as well. All the best, Brian

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/5/2021 9:40:00 AM

Lovely picture set with the spirited leaps of summer sunlight! Delightful Brian. Congrats and enthusiastic kudos!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/5/2021 10:09:00 AM

Hi Sam, Comments such as yours cast light on my day. Much appreciated, Brian

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2021 12:12:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/4/2021 2:32:00 PM

Greetings Anne-Lise, My appreciation for your stop by + congratulatory note. Have a grand summer. Cheers Brian

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/3/2021 8:10:00 PM

Brian, congrats on your win with this creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/4/2021 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, Kim, for your affirmative message. All the best, Brian

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/3/2021 1:24:00 PM

Brian, a beautiful haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/3/2021 4:52:00 PM

Hello Tania, Thank you very much for the high placement. Much appreciated. Cheers, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2021 10:11:00 AM

so fantastic!! Congrats

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/3/2021 11:29:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Kind of you to comment. I would love to borrow your muse sometime. Your portfolio astounds me. Be well, Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/3/2021 9:55:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/3/2021 11:33:00 AM

Hello my friend, So many of us appreciate your supportive words + your fine Souper submissions. Kindest regards, Brian

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/3/2021 6:52:00 AM

Oh, FABULOUS imagery! I could go for a field of daisies right now. Congratulations for your win! xomo

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/3/2021 11:31:00 AM

Hello Maureen, Very thoughtful of you to drop by to leave a thumbs up. I much admire your submissions on Poetry Soup. Sincerest regards, Brian

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/2/2021 9:36:00 AM

You've perfectly written a Haiku, painting the daisies blooming between April and June and the brilliant sun rays beaming down on the white landscape. Well done// Lasaad

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/2/2021 10:19:00 AM

Most appreciative of your stop by + the positive feedback, Lasaad. Your Haikus are top notch. Best wishes, Brian

Susan Woodrow

Date: 6/29/2021 7:40:00 PM

love it esp. that last line :)

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/29/2021 10:01:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. I am still struggling with Haiku. One day, sharper lines will surface. Be well. Brian