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Summer Dreams

Childhood’s simplest dreams, roll by upon a mind-screen. The simpler days of Brian’s childhood were spent fishing in the creek near the wood. With his dog Lawrence by his side, he’d cast his fishing lure with pride and dream of the day when he’d win a prize for catching a fish of very great size. Under lavender skies by a old gnarly oak. Minnows plop-plopped, an old bullfrog croaked; the flowing waters ever crisp and clean, sang him to sleep and provided sweet dreams. When he’d come in with his catch, she’d tell him they were the biggest yet; well-cleaned and cooked up with French fries; dessert was grandma’s homemade apple pie.

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Date: 7/10/2021 11:27:00 AM
Childhood summer dreams, one never forgets them, they are ingrained in our memory forever. great write my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/9/2021 10:09:00 AM
A beautiful write. I love your lavender skies. I see you are having fish, "French fries and grandma’s homemade apple pie." What time do we eat??? Have a blessed day...................
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Date: 7/5/2021 9:53:00 AM
What a beautiful poem. The rhyming is wonderful.
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Date: 7/5/2021 4:08:00 AM
Ahh!! His grandmother made him have pride and confidence in himself which is wonderful. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/3/2021 6:37:00 PM
Oh, how beautiful, M. L. Your captivating pen brought to the heart of this piece. Splendid poetry, I loved it, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/2/2021 10:47:00 AM
Simply wonderful!
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Date: 7/2/2021 5:03:00 AM
Wonderful summer dreams--reminiscing joyfully!
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Date: 7/2/2021 4:24:00 AM
Joys of childhood beautifully captured. Delightful read, brough much joy. Brought back old memories.
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Date: 7/1/2021 9:55:00 PM
Your summer menu is great. I love apple pie.
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Date: 7/1/2021 8:57:00 PM
Ah, the simpler, innocent days of childhood. Nicely conveived and lovely penned, M.L!
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Date: 7/1/2021 8:45:00 PM
Lovely ML. Brings back memories of Huckleberry Finn days. Oh to be able to return to the simple times when things were good. Great write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/1/2021 6:54:00 PM
This childhood story resonates with me..I love this! Brilliant!
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