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Summer Breeze

Song bird perched upon a limb Unveils a song of cheer Melodies float with such ease Musical chirps that always please Even the bees start to buzz Returning to the fragrant rose

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Sherese Gooden

Date: 6/16/2020 11:05:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Thanks for ushering summer, for me. It's that time of the year and I'm enjoying it and this lovely poem.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2020 10:47:00 PM

very creative, joseph!...important soup mail for you..huggs

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/26/2020 10:44:00 PM

Sweet Summer moments softly dance upon the page. : ) I am smiling. This is beautiful. Just love the double acrostic. Very creative Joseph. : ) Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/26/2020 5:24:00 PM

Hello Joseph May, Ah! The sound of summer. nicely done. enjoy your eveningmy friend.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/26/2020 10:31:00 AM

Great poetry, and so clever the form...

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2020 5:30:00 PM

This is lovely Joseph...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2020 1:30:00 PM

Love this example of the form, Joseph!! CAn't wait to try one.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/24/2020 9:17:00 AM

Fantastic and lovely--accomplished, Joseph! Janice

John Hardison

Date: 5/23/2020 8:00:00 PM

Joseph, Lovely acrostics, if I May say. Flows like a cool summer, such ease. Peace, Love, and Joy.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2020 4:57:00 PM

This is created magnificently Joseph! These double acrostics (or whatever they are called) are not easy to make them flow effortlessly like this one does. This is a fave for me my friend. It is just enchanting! Blessings xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 5/23/2020 1:35:00 PM

Lovely , I am glad I came to look at this I was totally confused, now I'm not.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/23/2020 1:33:00 PM

Amazing creativity, Joseph! Enjoyed the tone and flow of summer breeze.