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Summer Breeze

Butterflies flutter in summer's glow, the rose gleams crimson red In a while, autumn's breath, without regret, will wilt the blushing rose But summer breeze will linger on to caress each flower ~ 5-24-18 Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsor Heidi Sands

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/13/2018 10:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/2/2018 10:28:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Joseph.

Roy Pett

Date: 6/2/2018 1:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Joseph with your excellent Sijo. :))

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2018 3:01:00 PM

joseph, way to go...big congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2018 6:42:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Sijo poem, Joseph :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 6/1/2018 7:46:00 AM

Thank you Anne..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/1/2018 6:10:00 AM

Back with congrats Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 6/1/2018 7:46:00 AM

Thank you Vijay

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2018 11:50:00 PM

Beautifully written Joseph. Congratulations for your win. Thank you for entering my contest :)

Joseph May
Date: 6/1/2018 7:45:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Heidi

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2018 5:04:00 PM

Your image of the flowers and butterflies is beautiful, Joseph. Love the way you allow a part of summer to remain after autumn makes its debut. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Joseph May
Date: 5/28/2018 4:56:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2018 1:29:00 AM

the last line works beautifully in your sijo , Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2018 4:07:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2018 5:28:00 PM

love the study of contrast which makes your remarkable sijo true to form and substance, joseph!.. huggs and thanks for your nod in your recently-concluded contest ..huggs

Joseph May
Date: 5/25/2018 7:11:00 PM

You're welcome Nette.. thanks

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/25/2018 4:29:00 PM

Beautiful summer breeze Joseph..excellent entry..best for a BIG win.

Joseph May
Date: 5/25/2018 7:10:00 PM

Thank you Vijay